I must say that I've been waiting 3 full weeks before this book obtained enouth votes, si I am happy now. I'll go to the main points now, first on the wrighting qualty, wile I've been reading books in english for three years now, I can't say I'm proficient in ortograph so my point of view may not be of interest to you but so far, I didn't see notable mistakes.Second as the book just started being translated we can't be sure about the stability of updates but I'll just say that the 18th chapter was updated 20 hours ago while the 17th was 10 hours ago, not saying it is bad, but it may be bad.For the story developpement, it's fine, I mean, in other books the mc is like "I'm hearing voices and seeing floating textes, fine I'll follow their orders" while the corect thing to think is "am I crazy? Like, in my brain?" But some weirds happening, the sister of the unicorn man find the mc's house but I don't remember the mc telling them where he lives. But overall, it's okay.For the character desing, well the mc is the classical "I don't talk much and I'm cold headed and I'm beautifull" but you now what, I don't hate what is classical! but he is a bit lucky, beeing choosen out of a full room of doctors and interns to help,while he was playing on is phone, I'm okay withe the fact that a girl will mostly go to a charming guy, but when it comes to work, you won't takes the risk to bring someone who is playing on his phone at work to help just because he is dashing, your putting yourself in danger of being fired.For the world backgroud I don't know, it seems futuristic with the transformers (I don't now about others countrys but in france transformers are a bunch of giant robots who can transform in vehicles) but my lack of medical knowledge stop me from judging anithing about the hospital.All in all, It's very good for now, and I'm waiting to see what's next! (I hope the 19th chapter will be out before the 20th)
The Smiling, Proud Wanderer is a Wuxia novel by Jin Yong (Louis Cha). It was first serialized in Hong Kong in the newspaper Ming Pao from 20 April 1967 to 12 October 1969.Alternative Names:• Laughing in the Wind• State of Divinity• The Peerless Gallant Errant• The Proud and Gallant Wanderer• Xiao Ao Jiang Hu• 笑傲江湖Translators:• Lanny Lin (Chapter 1 - 21)• HHaung (Chapter 21)• Pokit (Chapter 21 onwards)• Bliss (Chapter 30 and 31)Editor:• HHaung (Chapter 21 onwards)The reason I'm putting up this novel is so I can read it for personal use. I watched the State of Divinity (1996 TV series) and loved that show. I knew there was a Novel of it but never spent the time to look for it until now. Was reading it online but the chapters very LONG and I keep loosing track of where I left off so I came here. Reading it off Webnovel is so much easier especially since it keeps track of where you left off. Unfortunately Webnovel has a 20k word / 100k character limit for each chapter so I had no choice but to chop up the chapters into parts.For those who also want to read this feel free. I am not taking someone else's work and passing them off as my own, full credit is given to the original writer, translators and editor as listed in the descriptions, plus the content of this novel is free online in multiple sources for everyone to read. So putting this up on Webnovel is just for my own convenience sake and anyone else who wishes to read this.
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Can't describe how awesome this novel is going. It is definitely a must read. YOU WON'T REGRET IT! Like seriously! If you're tired of looking at cliche novels out there, this one is definitely a breath of fresh air for you to read on. I swear you'll be begging for more <3
[ONLY MINOR SPOILERS]Fully caught up so I think I am finally eligible to write a review.Currently by far one of the most well written novels I have read so far out of all the novels I have read. Very logical story progression and no stupid decisions made nor indescribable luck. The story pans out very well and kept my attention the whole time. I never really lost interest and finished catching up after a few days of reading and now actively wait on updates.Skip this part if you don't live in the US. As a reader that currently lives in the US, more specifically florida. I really enjoy how I can actually relate to the locations listed in the novel and not only just get a general feeling for them like other novels I have read that take place in china or the future.However that isn't to say that the novel has no flaws. Everything has a flaw somewhere however the flaws in this novel are only minor flaws that just feel out of place. Only a minor spoiler here so if you don't want any skip the rest of this paragraph. The MC eventually is able to fly and can fly from florida up to NY in 6 hours if I recall correctly. That's 179 miles per hour (approx.) Still that is pretty fast just to be flying as a single person in the sky.All in all, I highly recommend this novel to anything looking for books that have a logical progression and a great story while you are at it. However this novel is not for snowflakes as there is a great deal of brutally that the whole world takes part in, each continent having its own view. That is all I am going to say here, if you want to know more maybe you should just read the novel. It is relatively short at the point I am posting this only being at chapter 93, the end of volume 2. Well, I go on for a while and am bad at endings, so I'll just leave it here. Goodbye reader.
This is one of those famous cases where the person possesses a genuinely great idea but executes it poorly. About 90% of the story consists of the protagonist's training, which is incredibly tedious. The protagonist is portrayed as an emotionless rock, and towards the end, undergoes an abrupt personality shift to become a clichéd villain "devoid of empathy." I'm a fan of stories featuring villains; my favorite novel is Reverend Insanity, but Shang is perhaps the most uninteresting character I've ever come across.The world depicted in the story feels entirely artificial and lifeless, almost as if it were merely a theatrical backdrop. The characters don't hold much significance to the narrative and seem to exist solely to create a false illusion of a living, breathing world. Occasionally, a character plays a crucial role in advancing the plot, but once that purpose is served, the author either forgets about them or kills them abruptly.To be honest, some parts of the story piqued my interest, such as the action-packed fights and the intricate power system. However, I prefer stories that evoke strong emotions, that quicken my heartbeat, and keep me on edge, eagerly anticipating what will unfold in the next chapter—a roller coaster of emotions, so to speak.Yet, this story felt more like a monotonous car trip on a bumpy road. I had hoped for something captivating, but it turned out to be disappointingly mediocre.
this is a good novel but has no relation to the name... I hope it doesn't get boring or nationalistic after entering a deep plot like similar novels of this genre...
I absolutely love the narration style ?
I need to talk about the sugar water scene because it is literally the most romantic moment in this entire batch and I am not even being dramatic. Su Xiaoyin arrives at the new courtyard, exhausted from the bike ride, and Yuan Songzhi immediately makes her a cup of warm sugar water. Just... that. He does not make a speech. He does not declare his feelings. He boils water, makes sugar water, and hands it to her while pretending to be busy with something else. And she drinks it and feels comfortable in body and mind. That is the entire romance arc of this relationship condensed into one beat. The way she then discovers his room preparations—the new bedding, the wild roses, the organized desk with everything she needs—that is the emotional payoff. She realizes he has been thinking about her needs before she even voices them. And then the massage conversation! She says something like if it is acupuncture, he will have to take off his pants, and his reaction—burning eyes, hoarse voice, covering her mouth—is the most electric moment in this chapter. He is a twenty-four-year-old man living alone with a woman he has feelings for, and he is trying SO HARD to maintain composure. The tension is palpable. Meanwhile, Lin Tianyang is literally nearly spitting blood at the stairwell entrance after being rejected by Cui Ling. The emotional contrast between the two storylines is brutal and beautiful. One man is quietly building something real, the other is loudly losing something he never deserved. Su Xiaoyin smiling all through dinner while Yuan Songzhi turns red every time she looks at him—that is the sweetest thing I have read in months. Pure feelings, indeed.
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WHAT THE HELL kind of ending is that????? want a better rating. Give a better ending.
Perfectly well written. Good Job.