as of chapter 12 being released it seems pretty good, but as there aren't enough chapters for a full review i will just say that it is quite good.
Interesting premise here. The cat being the main character was a bit unexpected. The chapters were very confusing. Who is who? Character introduction was not proper, and was very confusing in the first chapter. But, the system idea is fine, and different from what i saw before.
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Love the story line absolutely hilarious, my only complaint is there is some grammatical errors, but they aren't terrible, otherwise I don't think I've ever laughed so much about a man in a chicken costume kicking arse
For me it’s top 10 novels so far. Love the world build (perfect), and every details of skill, techniques and fighting scenarios. I can say it’s remind (kind of nostalgia to) me of Kingdom’s Bloodline and Birth Of The Demonic Sword. Please don’t drop because it’s hard to find good novels like this, and I kinda hope there will be more then 1000 chapters or even more it has a great potentialufffc.
It could be a nice story, sadly this is the worst Translation is saw in trial read. If u edit it a little bit it would be barely readable but no. For what its worse then raw MTL.
I really like your novel, i am not a native but i think your english is good. Nice story,detailed background, your mc is what it should be,not ***** and always thinking till the detail. A bit of slow but interesting. Overall the story is good. I appreciate your work. Keep it up . Thanks for the chap and nice job
Sorry but not to my liking. Why does most novel makes the mc stupid , which ruins the novel, even through they have high potential “System”. The mc is always weirdly stupider than normal person in novels with system. And mc in this novel was supposed to be a smart hacker that cheated in every way, but after he was transported to another world he became stupid. Those kind of novels can only progress by “The Lucky Hand Of Author” which will get obvious as the story goes on so it’s better if you make the mc smart to have many other ways to progress the story. For example he is so stupid to even try to find out about the world. Also he has the ability to create any skill but has not done that and I know that’d be OP but that’s the author’s fault for making it too OP. My suggestion in this kind of novels would be to make the system OP but the mc would have to work for those benefits. You should be able to guess what I’m talking about and if the system is OP without having to do any work than the only way to balance that would be to make the mc overly stupid which will literally ruin the story. At first it may seem like a comedy but that’s gonna be get boring very soon. This was an easy fix at the beginning but it’ll be very hard later on but still hope that you at least try to fix little by little as the story goes on.
The progress of the story is great and I have no problems about it. Can't wait for updates. It's not a harem which is good or bad, depends on your taste. The only problem I have is that it's sooooo addicting to read and it's not complete.Message to Author:I really hope there's a romance in this in story in the future, cause pure action/adventure is lonely....really lonely like some other novels where MC with no love interest, stories ending with MC dying or farming. Author-san I shall return in months to see the progress.
It is diamond, you need to dig it up and read it. I actually like a lot from world building, writing quality etc. its all somehow good.Except the first disciple heroine, its all good. His first disciple is a nah, not really good, from her story to her cultivation its all weird and somehow I didnt like it at all. I think its better if her power from something else, nah... just my opinion.Anyways, overall its good novel. Read it at least and support the author.~All Hail Me
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