Good story, but ruined by the translation. They got all the measurement wrong!I have seen it before already but this makes the story almost unreadable. For example: Chapter 81RAW: "有一丈八尺长,足足有她四个身高" FACTS: 一丈八尺 = 6 METER! 四个身高 = 4 times her height. TRANSLATION: eighty-foot-long, thirty times taller than the girlTHIS IS NOT TRANSLATION! This is translator ruining the story. TRANSLATION IS TERRIBLE!!! I have seen it multiple times, All the translated measurement are all wrong!!! all exaggerated, when in raw it seems normal.
First of all before you read my review i want you all to know that i like books that the MC is a extra in the novel. ex (Author pov, Trash of the count, etc) ,also if you are really lazy to read my review just go to conclusionfor the review i am now at chapter 14 as far as i read the story is slow as the author mentioned in his review,but if you are fine with early chapters of author pov you are going to be fine with it.in term if writing quality no doubt that this is really to notch rival of top ranking novel right now. Yes there is sometimes that the author spell wrong,but that is common mistake that can be found in most novel. of course it is rarely to see mistake hereAs character design well. It is design you could expect from historical western style like gold hair, silver hair. Don't get me wrong it isn't all character that will follow this pattern,but as i am at chapter 14 it is what it is.as for update heh 14 chaps a week. if not for 5 then whoosh.as world background i will say that i am just give it for 5 for now. i will not judge the world building of this story by only 14 chapters,but as i am reading it is getting better and better,so 5 for nowoverall this novel is really promising as it is my kind of favourite the extra MC. Things that i am sure is truly great for this novelare Writing quality,updating weekly, and story development. as for world background atleast for me is 4 stars. For the Character design it is more likely to depend on the reader perspective
WARNING !!!!!! Despite it's name , this novel is not anything similar to the legendary mechanic except it also deals with robots/mechs .the closest thing i can remember after reading this novel is mech emperor .a novel where the mc have a inheritance where he can create mech/robot to fight for him . he will plunder the planet resources to create power plant , factories ,and armies to conquer worlds and planes.I've read till chp 60, sofar so good .currently trying to find its mtl ,anyone got a clue ?
Alright, story but hard to read as the mc is so small-minded... for an mc with a power like his, this is awful.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
So I ask everyone to ignore the bad reviews as those have been resolved and should no longer be relevant thank you to everyone who put up with the original version and followed me to the new one hope you all have a blessed day
Disappointing read for this novel. It appears to be based loosely around another novel that I recall, something about 7 sisters or the like, no matter. Overall from the 15 free chapters (creators note in chapter 1 said 40 odd free) I found this dull, uninspiring and so typically cliche for this genre. Usual start is a struggling MC, down and out, needing cash fast to save ill relative, is miraculously saved by a female lead who reveals his family as their benefactor years ago. Discovers there are 3 other sisters who he now gets to live with and is to marry one by orders of their mother. From this point it is just a failing travesty. The MC is ineffective and quite righteous, but fails hard to be engaging, I could find nothing to remotely connect with to feel any particular emotion. The sisters are, fro what I have seen, rather manipulative, each not wanting to become a bride and don’t hesitate to throw other girls under the bus to gain his interest.Again, i cannot recommend this as nothing more than a sad attempt to gather readers giving nothing engaging back. Another criticism I have is the lack of reader tags to help identify various elements to enable readers to make a informed choice AND the premature chapter locks in place. Locking anything, before say 40 chapters, does not allow enough story to be assimilated and given a fair chance to decide whether it is suitable. 16 chapters is barely a footnote in a novel.
This is a story I HAD to review. It was like part of me (a very big part) decided it was happening and when the lazy me started considering just putting it off until I eventually forgetting to write one (happens a lot) the first part pulled a figurative gun out and held the lazy part of my at figurative gunpoint to actually write a proper review.So let me first mention how I binge read this novel hard. I literally put all other novels on hold for 2 days and even had to force myself just go get my daily free SS from webnovel check in etc.The author does an amazing job describing scenes and stories. This honestly felt like I was drawn into on of my favourite tv shows or anime with how I just imagined everything in my head more than I felt I was actually reading, everything flows so well together it's as smooth as a dream would be. The storyline is so well thought out, the world building is thorough but not too much and the author doesn't dump info on you, it's like every couple chapters there's a line or a few where it feels like setting the scene for just that part of the story but each time it's like a puzzle piece building up the world gradually until you suddenly realise how much worldbuilding has been going on without you thinking about it. It sounds like there's a lot of world guiding going on but actually there's not much. Enough to tell you what you need and want to know, nothing more or less. Exactly what you need without giving you too much to think about or not enough to understand the world.Character development is so incredibly realistic and full of just pure raw emotions and some illogical moments that just make sense when thinking from the heart while others fit perfectly when thinking logically. The author just knows exactly how to mix the two perfectly and blend them together. At time focusing on one, then the other and sometimes switching between them quickly in relatable and amazingly way where it just flows and fits and makes so much sense for it to do so while drawing you into the story and the feelings and perspectives of the characters.I have almost 0 issues with the writing quality. I think maybe a rare mistake here or there but I was too drawn into the story and focused my mind just corrected anything wrong subconsciously so I could keep reading without pause just to keep enjoying the amazing read that this novel provides.When it comes so some worries some people (probably heterosexual guys like me) about possible male on male action then I can say as long as you aren't homophobic then you have nothing to worry about. It's not off putting in the least and worse case the author puts ample warning that allows you to skip anything you might be sensitive on.A couple things to say to the author! Firstly the parts of some "Creators thoughts" at the end of a few chapters where you apologised for possible filler. I CAN'T SEE ANY FILLER! To me a filler is anything that does not progress the story and just increases word count. This novel however is done so beautifully where everything has a purpose. Either giving information or an opinion/perspective a character that heels progress the plot or explains emotions and why characters act the way they do, it's done perfectly and to even consider these chapters being given that label of "Filler" is not giving the novel (and especially the author) nearly enough credit.Something an author once told me when I asked for writing tips was to reduce wasted words. If it doesn't need to be there and doesn't progress the story then delete it. I have yet to find a single wasted word in this novel and I doubt I ever will see a wasted word from this author as long as they continue to have the same passion for writing as they have now.Lastly I would like to say that this has got be one of my favourite novels yet and I cant wait for more chapters. Even if you aren't sure I ask you just sit down and read this novel for an hour. You won't regret it.
Locked at chapter 6 disgusting. Honestly not worth you r time as far as I can tell as of chapter 6 lots of face slapping and feeling sorry for the main charecters bank account but not much else
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The only good thing about this novel is it comedy everything else is trash
Overall unsatisfactory in both personality and writing style I wish there was more of a good description than a horrible first impression. I hope the writer will continue to work on these issues and the story has me turning more pages
cant wait uwu uwu i love doctor stuff + game elements hhhhh uwu