the is good story please continue your stored MC is mysterious is good so please no harem and don't make him fool and don't show off abilities to peaple : it will be good if the become group off mysterious?thanks good luck and I love your stored
Good. Too bad it is not completed. Harry does feels to OP. And Hermione have no presence at all TATOh well, at least she does not get bullied unlike Ron. Lol author, do you have anything against Ron? Although considering Harry is Slytherin it is not OOC in my opinion.I am glad Harry get along with Snape though.Overall I enjoyed this.Author, if you still alive, will you come back and finish this? :puppy eyes: Please?
It is a good book. very interesting. I love it. The way u describe characters really makes it interesting. y
EEK! Keagan is filled with vibes! This unicorn is amazed with how well the author writes. But author, could you update more frequently? My heart cannot take this suspense ;D
Your book is amazing and awesome can't wait for the next chapter to update i really like reading your book because it interesting in so happy to read it??????????????
Very good chapter. I read them all and decided to small little review over the all for the time being. I must say you have very little grammar issues for a first time writer. In addition to fact these errors do barely anything to distract from the story. If you don't mind a proof reader I wouldn't kind helping you.
This is a unusually story but it gets more additive as you read more you wants more as if you are one with the they story can't wait for more
whats the point of this novel? ...........................................................................................................
I like this story so far it's unique and gives off another experience in reading novels about VR I look forward to more updates. For new people who have doubts just read a couple of chapters and I bet you will be hooked
It was good while it lasted. Now quarter of the chapters are locked. I know why you locked so many chapters but my gosh. You guys are killing me
Pretty decent read, if you want intense story with complicated plot then skip this.I have read until chp 1300~, although it is not that exciting but its not that bad, just quite bland with some interesting idea and some comedy, for casual happy reading i rate this 3.8/5.The system is not heavily used or depended, just for some set up and support, mostly depends on actual people that misunderstood and too creative. But without system the story will collapse.
Why is this in here? Why is Qidian taking everything in? Well I don't mind it if Qidian taking everything but I do mind it if the story going to be premium one!So, TWO is basically your everyday Chinese novel which depicts a lot lot lot of history of Chinese people's from the Yellow Emperor till date. If you don't like a lot of history you can pass this one but I recommend it to try.