You should keep it up. It is a good story plot. A deviation from the normal story lines of web novels and xianxia stories. I am waiting for the next chapters.
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liked it but need more frequent updates. the story was nice in the beginning. loved the starting chapter. and also a lot of other scenarios and how the character developed
You should add more spaces and sEperate thr longer paragrahs to make it easier to read. Long paragraphs are painful too read and quickly cause the reader to lose interest Otherwise great story!
There are some cliche elements with the arrogant young master right at the beginning but it didn't make it less enjoyable to read. The cultivation system isn't anything new so far but mc cheat is pretty fun and mostly focused on accumulation and learning instead of instant power-ups. I recommend it to people looking for some light reading.
To be honest, I feel that this novel is one of the best ones in the boss of the game reality type. It shows a sense of reality of another world unlike other novels. It makes you feel that it is truly another world based on the players perspective, giving yourself a sense of reality ,as if it trifling existed.Very Minor SpoilerThe game system which was made was very reasonable using a existing power system to catagorize the players increasing power. Additionally the way how they increase their power is also reasonable as it had already existed and not created out of nothing unlike other novels which makes it more of a video game instead of another world.Very Minor Spoiler ENDI hope everyone gives this novel a try even if you have an aversion to video game novels, I assure you this is very different.Thank you everyone for reading this and I hope you have a nice day!
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Read up to 800+ chapter. Story started off very interesting. MC opening dungeon shop with real monster he captured from different world that he could visit. As time goes on he gain more subordinate and his shop became more famous. At least until chapter 500+.After that the story seems to slow down massively. One of the story arc took around 100 chapter which solely focus on 1 battlefield being described by multiple character. It felt too padded.One of my issue with this novel is the writing on the action portion. Author done a good job writing about the business part but the action part is lacking. There is a severe lack of tension during the fight especially in the later part of the novel. I don't know why author felt it was necessary to insert jokes during the fight, multiple times, in almost every fighting part of the novel. It is really out of place, ruin the tension and break the immersion during reading.My last problem is with the characters, especially the MC. He really doesn't have much development even after so long. There is event where he seemed to experience character growth, and then he returned to how he is before. After some time the "growth event" occur again, and he still the same. This happen at least 3 times and changes are barely noticeable. The same can be said for his subordinate, they have no character development at all. The one with most development in character and story seemed to be his customer.Overall the story started off good until around chapter 500. It did not turn bad, just dull and boring.
Ago its too fun to read, it is you know at start somewhat give you sad feelings but then it is too good. Very interesting story. Author best of luck
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