So we copying one punch man now eh... Such shamelessness... I like
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One thing I can say about this novel is that it is way too addicting to put down and this is after reading through all of the available chapters. I spent days non stop reading which is very rare for me. The first thing that sets this apart from the typical isekai is the plot and character development.
It excels at creating realistic compelling characters that are brimming with personality in an equally compelling complex plot with many things happening in the background. Sensei went from someone I disliked with a vengeance to a pretty likeable character and the change was completely natural and not forced.
Another thing is how characters aside form the mc work, they change the plot, move the plot, have genuine personalities outside of the mc. I also love how the mc's actions have consequences and also aren't 100% moral like the typical shounen protagonist. Some decisions she makes will have you questioning right from wrong. The mc also comes across as cold and calculating from the start and I didn't like that at first, but i understand it comes from the pressure of trying to survive and overtime I like how she has started to care.
The diction /wording of chapters is very unique and smooth. Not only is the author's vocabulary extensive and intriguing, its never boring and you can feel the thought process that goes into picking each word. If I was to describe the authors mastery and control over their diction, it would be using a different weapon each time when hunting a target and never missing the bullseye.
The words really craft the feel of the scene and the characters take off and don't stop going. I wish there was more to read but I have to settle for daily updates.
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Its the best thing I have read in a while. Characters are beautifully described by the author. I personally recommend the novel to one who are fascinated towards sci-fic stories.
I am already short of words to describe the novel. Just would say, put the novel in your library and enjoy reading, just like I did
Writing Quality: 2/5
The writing is bad, maybe try grammarly.It is very dialogue heavy and written like a script. A story needs a good balance or dialogue and descriptions.
Update Stability: 5/5
I put that for everyone
Story Development: 3/5
It is not bad, but I wish I could enjoy it. It would be better if there was more descriptions added. Also some stuff was confusing that I had to reread to make sure I didn't miss anything.
Character Design: 3/5
Your characters are not bad, but once again I wish there was more descriptions to tell me about them. Dialogue does not give the depth of a person's feelings, motives, etc.
World Background: 3/5
Your story could be a gem, I enjoy what you are making and trying to do, but once again, we come back to descriptions; there needs to be some with paragraphs and not something written like a script.
You are on the right road, but maybe research more on writing or get inspired by other books while also using one of the sites that help in grammar.
Keep up the good work!
Overall solid and consistent writing and story. Definitly lives up to its title with a character that isnt afraid to analyze the situation he's in. A promising story from a promising author.
Only thing I hate is that I the user is exclaiming the other out , instead of ! Which makes no sense whatsoever. Also whenever the person asks a question, the author puts , instead of ? Which is not how you use a comma in speech whatsoever. Other than that, amazing book.
Not gonna lie, I'm not a huge fan of Dark themes but your story changed my point of view. The story build up had me on the edge of my seat. I loved it and I would recommend it to my friends.
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This is an interesting novel, besides the fact that the author has a huge PP, I could feel this novel going deep inside me that I enjoyed reading it. Few grammar mistakes and spellings aside, I dont know what the fuss was but it was readable. I also like the consistency of the mc that he doesnt turn into ur average webnovel protagonist. Yes author, more, more, more, ikuu, ikuu, ikuuuu