Such a good story with interesting characters and a really good delivery. One of the most interesting and captivating stories I have been reading.
I really like the lines that are simple yet meaningful, giving you the image and nuance without excessive description.
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I completed the book over the weekend and it was engaging enough that I read 1800 chapters. It is a Combination of Hidden Marriage and Trial Marriage with loving FL and ML. The first scene looks like Trial marriage and I was going to drop it but the author throws a couple of unique face slapping and Ml’s pursuit of the fl was very sweet and Unique. it’s Not the constant money throwing but Behind the scenes support actions that impressed me. the FL is very lovable not the super hero fl type that Has super hacking, gaming or fighting skilles. She is just Smart, kind and honest that everyone wants To love. The story is not Perfect but reads fine through MTL and if u r looking for above 18 scenes, author just indicates the Beginning and then next day.
Alright first off, that title is horribly translated. Second off, wasn’t the pregnancy stare in Strongest System? Correct me if I’m wrong. Third off, I know for a fact that the prenancy stare was in Keyboard. Feel like this is gonna be low quality fan fic
From an objective standpoint, this is a pretty good novel. MC is a transmigrator who put all of his talent into strength, so he has the abIlity to go strong. Only issue would be the ever present Chinese nationalism. It's not too much, but annoying.From an personal point of view I'm disappointed. *spoiler from having read raws up to chapter 71*I thought that this would become a novel where the MC doesn't trust the military and slowly gets power and manages to slowly unravel the mysteries in his brother's death. Instead, he casually walks into the military base and with the help of his teacher and other military members, he manages to get a copy of the recordings of his brother's death. He finds out what's wrong in one night and then hands the data he found out back to the higher ups in the military.
Just up to chapter 85 at the moment, felt like I had to leave a review for other readers to an accurate expectation of the novel.**SPOILERS BE WARNED**The intial world background in the first 20 chapters is rather good, however there are quite a few inconsistencies that come about later on. One example of this is the specific money the exclusively use in other continents. This however, doesn't really explain what they DO use instead of this 'mage currency', or in general the setting of which normal people live. The MC later also says he can just imagine the currency into reality and yet he continues to look for his opponents money after defeating them.Another problem is how fast paced and overpowered the MC got got, sort of destroying story development as theres just not enough time to get to know the other characters well enough.Another issue is the most blatant is the characters dialogue, grammer and in general the writing. The potential of this novel is great however the bland dialogue and bland personality of side characters such as the MCs apprentices is just horrible. Just a few chapters in we got to know there specialities but that all the individuality they have. They continues to say things 'at the same time' in sync but the amount of times this has happened is just lazy writing at this point. In contrast the Mcs creations happen to be more interesting than any other character.The last issue I find is the pacing, currently the MC during chapter 85 is at the power level he should be at chapter 250, the immediate growth and powerhouse he becomes after entering the world is just offputting and feels more like a brief power short book than a actual novel.Overall the novel is subpar, it could go far however the issues involving the pacing, poor writing and lack of interesting individuals leads to a lesser than average read.
I've been hooked to this book since I started reading it. HeroBrine is truly an undiscovered writer. .........................................
I really wish this book was still updating. was by far my favorite while it was. hopefully the author gets it sorted out and we can be back to seeing Lin fan
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May only have 11 chapters right now but it has already hooked me hope the story remains this level of interesting.
written by a copycat mada faka who has no originality and copied from other works and put together this waste of time piece of garbage...
don't read...
my opinion...
cemoi thinks this is an okay novel cemoi ratings: story Development: 4 good
writing quality: 4 average
character design: 3 average
updating stability: 4 good
world background: 3 average
total rating: 3.6 pretty okay novel not bad,not good just average.