This shizz real good. But i see a problem with world building in earth. My solution to that is let nexus train eddie even if it's just a glimpse every arc from eddies perspective. Just so we understand more about the current earth.
Hello Author, here is my review for you.
Writing Quality - So far i have come to like the way that you write your novel, and there does not seem to be a lot of grammatical issues, which is actually quite a rare thing to see in new novels. Perhaps you have some previous experience writing? Either way, I think you earned the 5 stars I have given you on this area.
Stability of Updates - Obviously 5 stars if you manage to keep up what you have promised. I would not want you to go as far as to release 25 chapters a week though, unless you really believe that you will be able to handle it without ruining the story.
Story Development - I will have to give this 3 stars at the moment as the story is only 7 chapters so far. I will change this based on what happens to the story in the future.
Character Design - I will leave this at 3 stars as well at the moment due to the ****** fact that we have not received a lot of information about our MC. It would be nice to get a prologue that somewhat explains how the life of our MC was before he was reincarnated into a skeleton. This rating will be changed as well once you have a few more chapters out.
World Background - Will keep this at 4 stars, although it is quite like the "Character Design" and "Story Development". We are still missing quite a lot of information regarding the world that he is in and the world he came from. For all I know he could have been an alien in his past life.
I love this story it is really interesting, I hope the novelist, doesn't stop writing
this is pure comedy.
keep up the good work, hope your book get contracted
finished reading this just now, 700+ chapters. and then it basically compressed maybe a few hundred chapters in a single chapter just to finish the novel. what a disappointment.
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So far, so good... I enjoy “real life + game” story so I find this novel really interesting.. Can’t wait for the next chapters. Keep it up!
Great story and very interesting . I have nothing left to say so I will just keep doing this until I can post it because need 140 characters sorry.
It's well written but when I wanted to sleep instead of reading any further I realized I was completely bored.
The book is great, a nice read rather. The Mc is not that bad and I'm quite enjoying him. World-building is okay and the plot is well sorted out.
this story is for masochist, if you like mc abused by other people then this is story for you! event the first 18+ mc is r@ped by man. .
Heya, this is the author with a shameless review for his own novel.
Firstly, I would like to thank you all for supporting this novel so greatly. Please continue to do so and I will continue to write it. I promise that i will do my level best to improve the quality even more and making it an exciting novel.
Secondly, I would like to thank you all for pointing out any mistakes or inconsistencies that you found. Please continue to do so.
I have corrected all of them, I think. If I haven't, then it will start making sense in future chapters.
Please continue to support the novel in any way you can whether it be through power stones, comments, reviews, gifts, golden tickets, or privileged chapters. I would be very happy and would be even more motivated.
Thank you. Please enjoy the novel :)
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