Hey, The lines are repeating. Plz fix it.
Its not even great its mid
I'm not sure honestly I made my profile after reading stuff here for a long time. All I know is I saw someone mention that if you want to raise your karma you need to comment more and get interactions so I'm assuming likes and comments count towards it. It's just kind of cool I don't really care enough to take away from my reading time to look into it lol
Thank you brother
Just read first 10 lines and the translation is tucked uppppppp
bro i just finish reading this novel but what i can tell you is just this read novel as it is... cause i promise you'll lose out if you did not finishes it.
The only thing the story doesn't fail at is grammar. The combat system is non sensical. The plot is full of routines. The cheat is boring and inconsistent. The mc doesn't even remember his skills. The economy is busted. The numbers of the novel don't make sense. He levels up to the se level repeatedly and learn skills with levels he don't have and aren't helpful.
So, I'll divide this review in pros and cons.
Pros:
-Author has an interesting concept going for him, especially in terms of MCs power and his hidden identity. it would simultaneously make a great slice of life and action novel
-The familiar school setting makes it easier to relate to
-It's worth it to pass time, especially when it's hard to predict the happenings
Cons
-The author's perspective is inconsistent, some lines are written in the past while some in the present, some active and some passive, though nothing that good editing can't fix.
-The choice of words could also have been better but again that'll automatically get better with time.
What's important here is keep experimenting, keep doing new things with it, try to create something completely original. As for the problems with language, they'll get better with time. All the best!
This novel is great in manny aspects, but if youcan't handle a immature/idiotic/retarded MC, I would steer away. I have read up to chapter 385, and the MC goes from actual development, and then suddenly all of it is lost, and you read about a retarded toddler, or a kindergardner who is close to being mentaly challanged. The main problem of this, is that we arereading about somone who is an *****, with experiance of war and blood and the harshness of the world, and at manny times throu the novel acknowlages this, ad actualy gives the illusion of maturing in increments. He goes from a mature responseble paragon for hes sect in the heat of the moment/some important times. To a dribbling gradeschooler with downs in about 0-100 in 0.001 sec flat. It is as if we are reading about two completly different people, and it only keeps on getting worse, he actualy becomes dumber in he's "moments" as the novel goes on. If you have problems reding about idiotic MC's who you doubt can even muster the intelligence to open a door, then this MC wil probably give you truble reading the novel.
When it comes to world building, the world unfolds in a natural and even pace as cultivation levels or political things in the sect unfolds.
translation quality becomes almost unreadable past chapter 40
since the guy is an IT nerd he must be smart or otherwise there is no novel. i also expect this guy making technology. he better have no harem. it would be nice if he hooked up with a girl like himself. if he reincarnates into a body ofa poor ass piece of sh*t person that got betrayed and needs to get revenge by killing that person then im gjust gonna drop this book i hear about the settings. i t better at least not have a boner whenevr he sees a girl. it would be pretty funny if he had stereotypical nerds sense of humour like e.g i would tell you a science joke but all of the argon. see what i did there. oh and also if some people say it's **** because it's isekai. i agree , it's just i'd like something unique about the mc , like how he could have a really nerdy smartass (p.s my rating is what i would expect out of this book)if it does better it will suprise me
This novel is poison, I wouldn't recommend people to read this. The grammar is extremely bad, half of the stuff happening in the novel doesn't even make sense. The mc is a retard who's got no IQ. Events randomly take place out of nowhere accompanied by haphazard time-skips. Poison testing this novel equates to "Death".