do you know what I hate,when the mc kills monsters above his level but it takes a hundred million enemies to level up,it does not make sense
This novel was interesting until chapter 19. We have a cautious, steady, paranoid protagonist. Why is he like this? Because unlike other players...if he dies in the game - it's all over. He will die for real. So of course he'll be afraid of being hurt (let alone the prospect of death).
And then it happened. From chapter 20 this novel became a [audience] reaction novel. Protagonist spends 10 chapters messing around with artefact upgrading gacha, and random audience react to it. I thought after 10 chapters of suffering the novel will finally move on...but no! Instead, there's even more filler as the author introduces a random character just so he can talk more about artefacts some more! This level of filler is absolutely crazy. In the first 40 chapters, 50% is worthless filler. It's too much.
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don't read it , it's unbearably stupid , the plot is the same old repetitive stuff , mc advances => something amazing happens => the mc suspect someone to be behind of it => misunderstand somebody => everyone mysterious => the same faking thing happens gets super boring
Trash absolutely trash
Don't even waste your time reading this and save your brain cells
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The writing quality is not good rest all is great . The Protagonist gets a system to chase around the girls. But dude can you stop making things exaggerated as getting a billion dollars or 10 billion dollars. I hope you can make things look just good but not great.
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Finally reached the 20 Chapters mark.
Arc 1 is almost complete, only a few chapters left.
Next up, 50 Chapters mark.
Thanks for reading so far. Hopefully, there'll be some power stones soon.
Lots of love.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
This story is fun to read. The interactions between the characters are also interesting. However, perhaps what should be improved is the writing. Sometimes paragraphs end awkwardly. I also feel the variety of words is limited. But, it's still a good read.