Nathan547
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NOTICE: Story underwent major editing to deal with glaring issues! Thus all previous reviews were deleted regardless of score. BUT story is still slow-paced, multi-perspective and has worldbuilding and lore that may seem boring for those only seeking for the smut chapters.
If you wanted instant harem, instant smut, then this is not for you.
One of my favoirite books of all tome. Aaron is such a unique character and the author crafted him so well. This is also a psychological genre that'll take you write into our protagonist's head. It's just so authentic. He is in a dark pit of despair, but can he find his light? Find out by clicking that READ!!
Another “slap everybody” novel. The main hero is god of martial arts from the start, so all fights are boring, and the only story development slightly interesting, but skipping chapter after chapter waiting when slapping would over and story continues it is not what I want to read.
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Ok I can honestly say that this novel really isn't a rip off of "Digging to survive i can see hints". Because honestly this novel is way better in all ways compared to "Digging to survive i can see hints". I have read "Digging to survive i can see hints" up to chapter 50 while I have read this novel up to chapter 20 so far I can see many similarly between them both but I can confidently say that "Digging to survive i can see hints" is like a complete knock off version of this novel in my opinion compared to this novel. I don't know if its just me but between the two stories I feel that there is more human interaction in this novel compared to "Digging to survive i can see hints" also there stakes are higher in this novel comparatively being that we actually learn there are groups of people competing for resources while we get to know about these groups unlike how in "Digging to survive i can see hints" it just says there are groups and we don't actually get any information about any group. There's also this leader board thing that we learn about in chapter 19 I think which I feel helps to have a clear goal for the moment in th book because in
"Digging to survive i can see hints" I feel there isn't real comprehensive goal besides surviving.
It's been a while since the last time I read fantasy, but yours took me by surprise. Interesting story! I'm definitely going to keep on reading your story.
how do you give negative stars? I wasted 25 minutes of my life on this trash:(
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I am loving this story that is much better than Martial Gamer, because it doesn't have all the MC stupidity of the official story that is a brain of idiot muscle that only knows how to fight and have ***.
While his MC, is intelligent, a good leader and general, and at the same time has noob doubts about some things, but learns quickly.
And his flow of history is nice.
I hope he continues the good work, and maybe some scenes in the real world? At least when the MC and the archer meet there for real?
