Daoist_Large_Slong
I really like this novel,the story is amazing and it keeps me interested.hope you don't drop it ./////////////////////))/)/////////////)///////////
Please keep updating; how can I get in contact with you, Broyles?
I like this translation, and sadly, there are only 19 chapters; I wish one day I could see this book published in English.
Bro you should take ideas from Chanakya arthshastra for warfare(not only physical but psychological war ) and not only copy techniques from modern world . You are writing about india. If you just implement all the foreign ideas in the kingdom and not something from Indian culture and wire something new, the book will just become a wish fulfilment type of Novel
It's a waste of time for this junk and a pile of nonsense. The author does not understand and does not know what he is writing about. Right from the very beginning, he treats the reader to stupid entries such as: A family of military men, dreams of being a warrior KING. We get a description of a person who thinks about being a KING and at the same time is weak. physically, lazy and without talent, but with a SYSTEM. The author's stupidity is striking from the very beginning. Rating minus 100.
Honest reviews are here.. Giving 3 stars, as saying that this novel is not bad, but it is not that good either.. If you are looking for a solo player here, you wouldn't find it.. He joined the guild on the 1st day he played this VR game.. The novel title "The King of Passive Skill" is his talent where he can get monster skill after kill them with a chance 1:1,000,000.. MC almost told everyone honestly who asked him about his talent, his luck value (9/10), and the skill MC copy from the monster.. The title is "The King bla bla bla," but the MC himself is a subordinate (MC joined guild, he is not a guild leader).. Every chapter is very long (I like a long chapter).. MC stat is invisible to us (reader) sometimes. You can try to read, and you would understand what I mean.. lol.. MC is a bit naive where he trusts many people easily, with no future plan and not caution type of player.. MC progress is not fast but no slow either, but it might seem slow because of the long chapter for every chapter. Plus, boring story development might contribute as seeing MC progress as slow. When read it, they were no excitement, curiousity, and awesomeness feeling.. The story is quite bland.. Depending on what genre you are looking for, you might hate this, and as for me, it is boring but not frustrated by it.. There are a lot more others novel that frustrated and annoyed us to die by the author bullying/torturing MC (I am sure you guys understand what I mean)..
Srsly? . I dropped this cause MC seems to be too merciful... He should have killed the phobio guy to gayn some EXP but instead He let him goo? TF?. I wasted my time reading this whole 5 chapters full of filler fights and all of that for what?? .. It's like a whole fight that should have been ended in 1 chapter being drag in 5 chapters.. Like srsly there's too many good scenes but the execution seems too tiring to read.. Every chapters seems to be fillers. The only good part of the story is when MC bully the dragon..Too much info dump... Tooooo slow phased! You have to read a whole 10 chapters or more to end a fight. Author seems intentionally stretching the story instead finishing it in 1 to 2 chapters..
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The plot is irritating, and the mc never seems to learn his lesson, he keeps doing the same thing that got him in trouble over and over again.
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This book is. Hmm...Breathtaking. It is the action for me. the author is well versed at active storytelling. He successfully glue the reader to the stories. I'm more than impressed with the character development. keep up the good work. also I love the rate of update.
I love the book, but im poor so author only gets my fast passes ill never use a sibgle coin.
Haven't read far enough to finish my review once im caught up ill update it.
