Daoist_Large_Slong
I give a 10, smooth flow of plot, conflicts just right, not too long, clear ending. Entertaining.
I hope it's good
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Only Huaxian's are good people. Japanese people are villians who betray and enslave other humans. Western People only care about elites and ignore the common people. Huaxian's are brave and courageous and help others and are the only people you can trust. Huaxian's will pick up arms and fight back against monsters instead of other races cowering and not fighting back. Huaxian's will share knowledge and help out of the goodness of their hearts while the west only hoards knowledge and won't help the "human race".
Don't read this unless you want hypocrisy about only the chinese being the light of the human race and their saviors and all other humans being storybook villians despite the chinese only caring about their own nationality that doesn't even exist anymore. Hundreds of millions have died within the novel and yet the novel still harps on about how humans have fallen into a lawless society and not being civilized yet the Huaxian's only are the people with morals. God forbid there be a Huaxian that isn't perfect or with the slightest flaw. God forbid a japanese person not want to enslave "the fellow Huaxian's".
No sympathy for continued and systematic racism within this novel and it deserves to be trashed for it.
For those looking for a good historical fiction which a modern man tries to use his wits to gain an advantage in a fantasy scenario, this isn't it
This novel is disappointing because they give the MC the perfect weapon to tackle the next mission (so if there was a fire demon they would give him a water mage just to be able to counter it perfectly)
The MC's knowledge is barely relevant as the system gives him textbooks on what to do (agriculture etc) Lazy writing and poor plot
not bad good writing, it's just weirdly heavy with all the secondary knowledge, I find myself just skipping the unending descriptions on things and especially the politics and schemes, they just kinda happen by front loading copious amounts of exposition and expecting people to follow along with the convoluted nonsense, also I think you went to big to quickly introducing universe level concepts before he barely steps out of his first sect is a good way to burn yourself out and the readers, overall meh I read it a little at a time when other novels are updating
G'day mates! A new novel by Choas, so you know it will be good!
Writing Quality: There have been very few errors in the currently released chapters. 4.9/5
Stability of Updates: Tbd.
Story Development: Seems interesting so far, and Choas's past stories have had interesting plots, so I'm looking forward to seeing how this one develops.
Character Design: Just in the first few chapters, several interesting people have been introduced. Fey best girl?
World Background: It seems to be a science/magic mixed world with monsters roaming the wilds, I hope to read more of Dax's adventures!
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It has the same idea as 'Worldwide Simulation Era' but 'I Have Awakened The Deduction System' is more restrained, it's not as exaggerated as the 'first' one, the 'first' one has a lot of immortality cultivation, and a lot of Chinese stuff, it even has a little of prejudice from other countries (spoiler - in the 'first' mc world there was a war, and china conquered the planet), and 'second', I only read up to chapter 20, and according to the synopsis, it has genetics, martial arts, world of fantasy.
Over rated. Too slow of a phase with the story, too OP (ch 15 already had godly skills), low IQ MC (doesn't use his hack every time), incomplete description of levels and whatnot...
The translation quality is trash, see e.g.
“Great Chu just develop period if this thing is exposed, will lead to the people’s hearts not stable, is to the emperor will never be soft.”
