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I haven't read all the chapters yet but this story is defenitly interesting and would recommend it from what I have read so far but I know nothing about the what I haven't read.
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why does he bring the weak girls with him
Bro this book is something else the amount of detail put into it is completely mind-blowing, fellow readers do not be discouraged by the current pace of the novel as later I believe it will! become even greater than it is now.
I believe this book is worthy of being put in your libraries as I can tell with just 5 chapters the amount of detail and hard work that was put into this book mesmerises me and its use of description, imagery and character interaction creates a very vivid world of my own in my head.
I thank the author for granting us such a good read... genres like this I say are not my biggest interests but this has absolutely got me hooked.
thank you and goodbye
This story is building up nicely. The mystery about his live and the development of his character want me to read more about what he will become in the future
Thanks to the author for explaining that it was indeed intentional to time skip the section I asked about. Only gripe I have is how abrupt and random the time skip was, especially when it spoiled a LOT of story. For those that want to know when this big skip happens, it's the chapter after [Trauma].
SPOILER NEXT:
The big leap from the MC just surviving an attack, only to suddenly jump to when he's now suddenly in a life or death duel with no clue as to who any of the newly introduced characters are is disorienting. I thought it was intended at first but the amount of information that was lacking was off putting and frustrating to read through to the point where I genuinely thought there were chapters missing. It wasn't like the time skip thing that happened at the start where the MC clicked "NO" and then we got the background up until that foreshadowing point, it was just a straight up skip of what seemed to be 1-2 mini arcs worth of content to read.
CONCLUSION:
I enjoy this story, but the fact that I have to trudge through a completely new arc and characters I know nothing about and have to remember what their relationships and characteristics are have put me in a dilemma as it started becoming less enjoyable for me. I may try and read again later cause I don't want to make reading what is clearly a well thought out and developed story a chore. I recommend reading in small intervals, or stop if you get confused and take a break.
I have been reading the comments and there have been a lot of thoughts on this...
First of all I would say this novel is good and it keeps your interest till the end,
Secondly it is difficult to translate especially from Chinese so well done on trying to do this effort,
Lastly I would congratulate this person on doing so and I hope that he would continue improving and may be one day all be in his favour
Bad comments are easy to find but choosing the right words to encourage someone is a gift to that person which indeed will be returned to you if you are giving the same kind of effort. Words easier said than Actions performed...
It has a good background and the idea seems interesting, but It needs proper spelling and grammar. Other than that I think it was pretty neat.
Well its the first time in my life being 1st in comment section so for my first greeting , first I would like to thank the author for this novel . then dot dot dot dot ............................ Is 140 done? .. Not yet? .......
Love It so far, more chapter plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .......................... plenty more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........................
cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool, i saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay the stooooooooooooooooooooory why do I need to write so many characters for a review? Im new.