it was xoss
the starting is soo interesting
i cant resist...
i wanna read more chapter
waiting
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I give five stars to this..... really creative...... I recommend this novel to be highly recommended.....
Oh my, this is a great story, I was a little hesitant when I first started reading but as you read on...the author kicks into high gear, I even went for the highest privilege just to keep reading. In my opinion the story is up their with the rest of the top notch stories I've read so far.
love this book I would never have guess Joshua had such power this book has a real good twist to its title
I found out that it is really a nice read. as a sci-fi and cyberpunk genre that I can see through here which are my favorite.
I love how the author made the character as humane as possible, but for story development aspect. the pace starting from ch 4 is pretty unstable. try to made it consistent and it will be a nice read!
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Cons: The grammar is horrid and is almost nonexistent, a few characters feel unnecessary and I just hate even if they have a purpose, such as the sister. She might give the MC a purpose, but it's bad if I hope she dies in every single chapter she is in. The novel uses a ridiculous amount of cliches and is like I said, inconsistent. For ex. in one of the early chapters which was a small example, The notification literally notified him it was nora in front of him but he asked himself where nora is (as if she's not there). Also in one chapter the author forgot to add a description of a class and said they would as soon as possible, its been a month since. The rules that the author makes are inconsistent for example at one point the MC sadly states he can't use a spear because he's a warrior, and then comments right after that classes can use any weapon. Then a few paragraphs later he begins using a spear which I don't know how he has, because according to him warriors start with a sword and shield. He then instead of being a warrior becomes a mage, which is acceptable, but using the very same logic from earlier he shouldn't be able to use a spear but does. Pros: The story seemed bearable and maybe a decent read if the grammar was fixed. Not too many here. Giving it two stars because it actually kept me reading like 5 chapters.
I discovered this book on a lazy Friday afternoon, in which I had just finished reading one of the greatest works on this site. However, once I read the first line from esteemed author Crucruel, I was completely taken aback.It would be an understatement to say that this novel--no, this work of art--is truly a masterpiece, one of the finest novels on this site. Following the path of the protagonist, Zen Su (Kim Joon-won), the readers are thrown into a finely developed world. Not only does this novel bring a new, fresh approach to the rebirth sub-genre, but the unique ideas brought within the words truly enlighten any reader who picks up this masterpiece.In particular, the focus of the duality of mankind and the consequences that an individual must be put through in times of stress exemplify some of the greatest philosophical beliefs that Mr. Crucruel is quite renowned for. Furthermore, the method by which these words are written and knitted together into a complex web of beautiful writing demonstrate Mr. Crucruel's profound knowledge and experience in the writing industry.It is quite rare for me to discover a work that truly speaks to my heart and soul, and for me to have the capability to lay my eyes on this blessed work is something that I cannot describe my gratitude for.Despite the fact that there are only twelve chapters published up to date, these mere twelve chapters are enough to capture the attention of any reader. If one may be in the debate of whether or not to choose to continue with this novel, it is highly recommended that one reads up to date before creating such a decision. This piece of artwork is something that I can sincerely call life-changing, so a decision should be carefully made if it comes to this point.Also, before the end of the review, I would like to note my absolute fervor for the second leading male character, A'mu, and the cloud of mystery that surrounds him. I do hope that Mr. Crucruel decides to add in more scenes of said leading character, other than the protagonist Zen Su.Overall, regardless, I would rate this novel much higher than five stars if possible, yet that is beyond the limits of this site. And similarly, perhaps this is the way that I describe the true quality of this novel. It is beyond the limits of this site, beyond the limits of writing. It is truly an absolute work of art.
(Chap 202)I only started reading this novel because I saw this in my daily recommendation and I would say that I am not disappointed...------This novel is perfect for me since it is filled with an mc whose character is chaotic -- definitely not a good guy------So mc is this guy who lives in a rural village which is within a aristocratic society ( kingdom ) and his mother is definitely a high ranked one..《 This world becomes a VRMMORPG by the name of CHAOS in his urban world 》---before the start of the story he just wanted to live a simp life but he got transmigrated Into the modern ( post-apocalyptic ) world in the body of a child who has a mental disorder called interference ( soul instability) invasion of another soul in his body...----Personally I liked world #001 it was an entirely different world with a different background which really piqued my intrest..-----I only have to say that the update apeed of one a day is impressive and I have seen that the authour tends to use 11 - 12 chap. for each mini arc ( authour notes it down )..The arcs shift from one to another with no interlude (there are fillers) but the mc is restless-----Writing quality ☆☆☆☆Story development ☆☆☆☆☆Character design ☆☆☆☆Update stability ☆☆☆☆☆World background ☆☆☆☆☆---Highly recommend for someone who enjoys a novel which is filled with an mc who is minorly sociopathic... and sees the society for what it is...----