Awesome!
The writing quality is not good rest all is great . The Protagonist gets a system to chase around the girls. But dude can you stop making things exaggerated as getting a billion dollars or 10 billion dollars. I hope you can make things look just good but not great.
keep up the great work!!other than the fee errors in grammar, the story has a great first few chapters already.Hope to see you update more when you can as it would be interesting to see where you head with your FF.here is 5 Stars for encouragement.
just started and its good.A little unusual writing style for webnovels but story is interesting enough.Keep it up.............
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Westernizing novels is a great indication of the current state of this app.1. Stealing novels and rewriting them, breaking/abusing global copyright laws.2. Trash translations.3. These stories are mediocre at best, every single trial read is not worth looking into if they are not from a credible author and or translator.4. Novels chosen for voting pool often get dropped by the translators when no one is supporting them. And no one is supporting them because they're either the same as other webnovels or other viable reasons.For this novel, it is not that bad. But the immersion is broken for me when it's clearly been changed heavily by the translator. Truly, it feels like they white-washed everything to fit the intended audience, but ended up backfiring on them instead. Ruins the experience.
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From the start to the recent chapters the story has flowed quite well with no jarring plots, its been written brilliantly, the world building has been done well as well but has to have a qualitative upgrade once more worlds are introduced, the human cultivation system while it might draw in readers because of the new beast system but is actually quite limiting, with barely the good soul world bearers having a chance at a high level and the rest having to accept mediocrity, body refining cultivation has now been introduced which is a good start already and with the mc being of a stronger race im guessing he'll also cultivate with that races system and bloodline which again would be a stronger system, when his bloodline awakens i hope the bloodline itself grants him a way to cultivate the way the celestia race does atleast
For a book which the author says will only have about 1000 chapters we're alraedy almost 30% through with only about a year gone and no actual personality change in the mc, but just teenage growth, if the mc doesnt change much this story will somehow end up with an mc with a teenagers personality, no special personalities like being a sadist, womanizer, cold, evil,lazy, chilled out,and the chaotic good ones etc
What we have is a person who nice and at best hot blooded for battle which is too basic for an mc hes basically got aside characters personality
THe side charactets dont pose much attachment and are disposable in the sense the mc will leave them behind, hopefully that changes when he reaches a stronger race and makes friends
Completing this story in 700 chapters kinda feels jarring, i expect multiple time skips to achieve that which i dont want to see in quick succesion, hopefully the author decides to keep taking it at a slow pace and extend the novel to about 1500 chapters atleast
THe time flow needs a revamp, with the soul powers issue dealt with, and body refining being a long term thing, we dont need a day to day story, time can flow faster, if i ignore everything and just look at how at almost 300 chapters we've only had almost 1 year passing i must say its one of the world time passage sequences written, with there being no reason to have the mc start growing to the top in just a few years, and with him potentially having a long life span, the time definitely has to flow faster
In essence except these minor issues to be dealt with the story itself is quite nice and has good potential the only thing to avoid i guess is an over fixation on the human race and making it reach the top, too many books have done that, and frankly books that dont focus on races to take up and focus on the mc and his companions and stuff as people more have a better plot
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decent read, bit too much of a wish fulfilment, MC having photographic memory and interest in war and techcnology is a big enough advantage, yet every ally he met is competent while every enemies feel incompetent just make this bit too smooth sailing, would be nicer if character arent too one-dimensional...
overall nice read for a kingdom building story but far too fast and easy for my taste
An amazing novel, instead of going towards the action side of pets, Pet King focuses more on the slice of life and the development of main character and the pets.
With each pet being very unique and having a backstory, the progression of pets is simply wonderful, with almost all pets having complete character arcs, you can expect a more detailed characters oriented story.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................