I adore this writing and the character development is great. I get anxious when I've finished the published work and have to wait for the next chapter!
TBH Who cares where the novel ends up. No one sues those other smaller websites for hosting the novels. Maybe Qidian should ask first but having to stop releasing novels here just because another bigger platform/website is suppressing it is just plain bs. In my opinion anyway.
Anyway i hope qidian gets to release all those other novels like MArtial God Asura, the first parts of Nine Heaven (or whatever its called), Against the Gods and many many many more.
This novel is a great read and it gave me chills during the scene when the Mc became a Yandere for a moment and the reaction other people gave was the best especially Minami I had goosebumps
I like this novel, it's interesting and has some twist and turns and how the mc gains his power and defeat his rivals. The mc is truly a brilliant young man.
I am a fujoshi and i actually skipped to the *** scene (im so dirty minded)
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nih orang bikin cerita selalu aja gelap. sudah gitu kovernya selalu ada warna merah, dan hitam, baik di karya yang ini maupun karya yang sebelumnya. membaca cerita ini membuatku semakin membanteng.
First this is a great book I love the Mc and the character development is insane it just I want to see more unique powers except the Mc everyone else power sucks I mean 5 star Manuel and all you get is pyromancer and the edgy guy first of all I love him he actually made me laugh I just hope to see more than him I mean I was really hyped when I saw he is gonna battle then he just summon a bunch of hands from the ground and start complaining on how that was his strongest spell
The strengths:
It has good plotting that was carefully made and its pacing is fine too. It has good interactions and also dialogues. Writing quality is also there and has lots of potential.
Weakness:
Some paragraphs needed some trimming as they were too long. The author also needs to improve the vocabulary or choice of words. Flow also sometimes stuttery.
Well best of luck! And happy writing! The best is yet to come and the author has a lot more to offer! [img=recommend]
amazing story, i feel soo connected with the main character with all the description you provided and to be honest all the struggles he goes through it hits like a ( he just like me fr...lol moment) i love it keep going
I enjoy when a story isn't rushed and when it's well written, and these certainly apply to this story. It is eloquently worded and it spends much time on describing the interactions between characters as well as the thoughts of the main character. These are both the book's greatest strenths and weaknesses in my opinion. To illustrate this I will write two lines essentially describing the same thing:-"He could not help but allow the lurking smile at the back of his mind grow on his face as he expressed the feeling his thoughts gave him"-"He smiled at the thought"I enjoy these lengthy descriptions... but not when the book is full of them. Most of the descriptions are like the first option, and I got tired of it pretty quickly. The phrase "could not help but" is also unnecessarily abused to an almost hilarious degree. While I certainly cannot fault the author on their english, I wish they would consider the time to use these dragged out ways to say things that could be short and concise. Which brings me to my second point, the pacing. Dear lord is the pacing slow, which I also enjoy at times, but only if we get some action in between. Those who have read the book may be thinking "wasn't the monster wave enough action?" and to that I say, it should have been half as lengthy and have more fighting rather than pointless dialogue. Also, the monsters are literally only described as that, 'monsters'. Nothing is said about how the regular monsters look in the first couple of chapters of the fight. I'd say, give the book a chance, those of the same opinion as me regarding pacing and language will quickly realize it isn't for them, and for the less picky, I believe you will enjoy it. It certainly isn't bad by any means, but I will not be reading more than 60 chapters of it. Hope you can take some of the criticism to heart and improve author, flaws aside I think you have a good story in you.
this is awesome I love this book please continue with your skill. I love it
Has potential but the grammar is so disturbing
Example:
Zhang Yihan sat up, and turned on the lamp and took a look. There was nothing special on the desk except for the stone he picked up
The stone was walking on his way home after school at night and suddenly hit him from the sky
Chapter 2
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-_- the stone was walking (the hell?)
Would have beet better if this was TLed properly..
This would easily break through 5m views here.
Was this MTLed?
I never read MTLed novels before but I think this is it.
I thought people were joking when they said MTLed novels can make you suffer when reading but they were right.