The characters seem well fleshed out, worldbuilding is solid but, you should update more frequently, on the first day I published a short prologue and the first chapter, but other than that, its all good
Very good and entertaining, I really recommend it.
Hey, the author is here to shamelessly rate my own novel!But on a serious note, this novel has been flowing in my brain for quite a long time and finally i get the change to share it with you guys.It's similar to The World Online, as i said in my author's notes however this won't be a copy & paste type of story.Enjoy it, it is not for those who wish to read a 'grand novel' with 'exceptional world building', it's just a story to read when you are bored and stuff.
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In this story, the author will share his thoughts about his other novels, where to send, where to turn the story, thoughts about writing stories. What to do when the lines passed? 500 - 10000-50000-100000 words? This is a good marketing ploy so that a beginner author would like to write further, there was some sort of incentive. And then enter this track and write further, this is a fascinating activity.At the same time, apparently, it is necessary to improve the grammar ... there is much to strive for and to grow.It is interesting for 1 month, 3 months, 6 months, 12 months, how many people will see the work? How many will subscribe or unsubscribe?Maybe finally there will be a new story from another author dedicated to the Silk Road?This is all very entertaining!Many thanks to the authors of this site!You can be not only a reader, but also an author, this process is no less fascinating
Bad,no chapter in month, and pretty much copying another novel I know.Dghudffhjfsdgkofqdvjteschureghufdbjydwgjirdvhydehjyegbiydgbjtghtwegjyrfhjirfbkourwdgjkitwfhkirdvkotegj
This author desperately needs a editor. The grammar here is horrendous. Bordering on illegible. Otherwise it has a good premise, story might need some fine tuning, like an introduction to the character maybe? or some developement to help you understand where he came from and where he is going BEFORE his death. So you understand him and his time before the travel earlier on in the story. Overall, i suggest getting someone to fix the writing for the author. But keep up the work, its possible to make it better, looking forward to it.
Story and pass not bad. Decent world build, characters can go from being all over the place or feel 1d like 0-100 which is confusing. The most annoying thing though is too much unnecessary auntie notes/interjections, just be confident that readers can understand. And reduce all the stuff at end of each chapter, really sucks when you have speech on and it drags on endlessly
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Like it.. One of the novel here that i enjoyed reading. Not those novels where you can't stop reading once you starts but its pretty close, especially if you loved kingdom building. Overall above average i just rate it higher for now coz i know for myself what i enjoyed and want to share it to others.. To the Author: Cant really give a constructive feedback about this book im not really into it, but so far so good and thank you hope you improve it more?
A novel with great potential ! The author has done a great job describing the story in a very effective way. If interested should definitely give it a try.
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