nicely written,hope it continues but doesn't looks like it will
Season 1 was so much fun for me to write, and I'd like to think I have created a good trio of main characters and an array of side characters that should spark some fun stories in the future!Season 2 will follow the journey of our trio as they journeyed to yet a much bigger and badder superhuman city of the world! Jon will confront with his enemies old and new and the world as we know it grows every bigger!I haven't been this excited about writing in a long time! Here's to a fun time ahead!
When I first started reading this, it was exciting and had my full attention. The premise was good, the story started out well, and the character was somewhat interesting. Now the MC has turned into the biggest hypocrite, doesn't follow his own beliefs, and is probably a psychopath. The author has repeatedly written this and that about the beliefs the character follow.....then throws it out the window.The author seems to want to write 3 books in one and it's all over the place with no real consistency. It has turned into a wish fulfillment story. I would say read the first 40 or so chapters then drop.
Some of my biggest issues with this story are the weird slang the voice chick uses, the pacing and the MC. Slam donkeys? Pay pigging? Those terms make me cringe! The story picks up pace after the fourth chapter and before that, things are really slow. The funniest part so far was the thong scene in chapter five and that's it. The author constantly brings up the MC's hair and weight and constantly makes fun of him for it. Those jokes get old fast. Ben reminds me of Michael Scott but younger and self-aware of the fact that people don't like him. I like comedic stories where bad things happen to an unlikable protagonist (i.e. Dwight Schrute in The Office) but this story didn't make me laugh much
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while it's true that it's on a number of other sites there is no way of knowing witch site it belongs to and this sites easy way of going between chapters is worth the pennies you would have to spend
This novel has its ups and downs but it's definitely worth a read. I definitely highly recommend giving it a try. The only warning is that ita harem. So yeah.
What you will find in this novel, dear reader? A story of a soul that stayed for a long time in the darkness and is transmigrated to another world with a simple job: protect someone. Maybe the fate of the world will be decided if he suceeeds or not.
I read this novel a long time ago somewhere else. I liked the idea of the novel and even read the machine translated novel for more than +1500 chapters, before even the liking of the idea could not make me carry on.I get the impression that the author really had a good idea and before he started he also properly thought of the beginning and then had some loose ideas where the story could go.But the more you read on, the more you realise that that's the only thinking the author did for the story, because it just gets worse and worse. The MC is going absolutely nowhere and like a mouse in a wheel forever fighting to get stronger.
Hello! Author here. I'd like to give readers more details about His Peasant Wife: Yao Ling, so you will know what you will expect when you read this novel :1. This story will be started with contractual marriage between the ML and FL - an ancient one ^^2. It will lead them to find the FL's birth family and the ML's past. They will be adopted by a certain wealthy family.3. The ML forgot about his past. He's a bit calculative, smart, and along the way... his masculinity will be trained. LOL. Oh... and he's also loving the FL and also er---- a bit pervert?4. The FL is cute, smart, and beautiful. Most of the things that save her are combinations of her smartness and luck! She will learn and hone her black-bellied skill along the way. The ML's pervertedness will rub into her too >.<5. A lot of funny and 'quite' intimate scene along the way.6. There will be a lot of cuteness and fluffiness on the other secondary characters.7. Some tragic event will happen but don't worry, this story will have a happy ending! A happy ending is a must for me, otherwise, I will cry a river >.< 8. I want this novel to be stress-free and always give readers happy feel. *Cheers!*
I love it!
Feeling guilty is not enough because if one commit cheating once it's mistake but twice is intentional and he is easily getting away with it please make him suffer its getting bitter