well how do I put it, have you ever play some Pay to Win Game where developer purposely try to piss off player by gorging typical intrusive ads, yeah this is how I felt whenever I read this s#it.
basically you git your typical Lu Yuan who is a transmigrator without system but in exchange he got more Plot Armor than typical xianxia genre because whatever he did some asspull plot armor by author will always help him, not to mention so many toxicity of peanut gallery where mc face slapping everyone else via plagiarizing other people's work not to mention if you're not really into acts like music,chinese poetry & movie you won't even understand why its awesome.
basically this is a rio off of Library of Heaven where mc make use of his future knowledge to release new arts in order to face slap everyone else, heck atleast Zhang Xuan were smart enough to use his hrain sometime while Lu Yuan is thorough loser angst man who blame everything on everyone else why he's simply a lazy bummer & the main cause of his misfortune fate.
i gave u the 5 star for the promising story and the 120 chapter in 1 week .
a man of focus indeed........................................................................................................
a great story can come of this but you will need grammar corrections and an expansion on the story I would recommend that you do not drop this story as it can become a huge hit if reworked
Hey man update more chapters
I like your fanfic
I would appreciate if you continue to update your fanfic regularly
thanks for your work
awesome
Before reading i just have to add..
Yato's eyes ftw
..And damn required characters for reviews..............................................
Sooo childish just basic book like a elemantry school reading books
Sooo childish just basic book like a elemantry school reading books
Sooo childish just basic book like a elemantry school reading books
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It is my first time reading a book like this, I tell you it's good. Imagene, a father doing everything he can for his daughter ❤️❤️❤️. Keep up the good work.
I didn't even read this but i come here to ask how adopting a super pet make you into a asura... Spoiler is also welcomed i just wan to know how will his development start and if it will be connected to his pet.
Swordsman is one action-packed and spooky story (which Shonen Jump seems to have a lot of lately), with one of the main events of the series actually taking place on Halloween. And, while the scary season is over, the swordsman isn't, it's actually one of the most popular novels of the fall.
DOMAIN EXPANSION.
I can't understand one thing is the writer's time worthless or Ours. Nearly in every chapter you get to see his full status, sometimes twice in same chapter. Writer don't you have your brain just for some point increase you write whole status window, who like to read same thing several times and also so detailed explanation about hunts and xp gain. It's a novel focus on story not numbers. Don't waste our time keep it short and simple.
About the story its slow paced after reading nearly 100s of chpts my personal opinion writer is wasting words just to increase number no need for so much elaborations. Hope latter chapters are good.
Urban story, president of a gaming company. Pays homage to "Losing Money to be a Tycoon" by naming the MC as a department head of Tengda in his previous life. Surprisingly decent, and reasonably funny. Give this one a try before making judgements.