the synopsis that is supposed to tell us about the story says nothing at all...
fillers:
"why does the burger have less energy than the steak?
the burger is in its ground state."
Normally I would point out the obvious grammar mistakes and plot holes in the story and some of the stuff that just doesn’t make sense
but this is clearly made for fun and to enjoy a light hearted story. And it does exactly that.
When do I get new chapters, it’ been many days by getting new chapt erss
Literally the same as the author's other novel but with some small changes. Also very predictable (cliché), the secondary characters have no common sense (reasoning), another in which the protagonist cannot be called a villain just because he says so in the novel. The end of the novel does not bring anything new that another does not see, you no longer have this type, if you have not read the author's other novel you can remember to read.
Not gunna lie its pretty garbage, but its the kind of garbage that kind of warms up to you over time. The world building is pretty good... kind of... if you ignore that no one knows exactly how the monster tier system works. So far there are 3 decent characters aside from the mc that seem kinda interesting, especially Ironman and her mum. Story is kinda weak tbh but its better than I expected it to be, not much going on except farming/grinding monsters and occasionally going home or to sell stuff. Translation is pretty good so far and the update frequency is said to be around 10 chapters a week so that's pretty nice. All in all I would recommend it to anyone that is vaguely interested in Monsters Paradise, Monster Pet Evolution etc. Its a nice bit of junk that I know is bad for me but it helps me appreciate Monster Pet Evolution even more. But yeah, check it out if you have time on your hands.
This novel is amazing. I am so glad I saw this while browsing novels. This has a good storyline. I am also getting some undertones from stardew valley which I’m liking. Thanks for this novel and I am hoping for more.
Please bring this back..I have been following your fanfics a lot..the way you described the plays the in kuroko no Basuke fanfic , the pacing and originality of the Harry Potter fanfic and now the amazing realism and world development of the Naruto fanfic… it this original novel(mostly read on royal road) deserves to be completed.. even if it’s only one chapter a month…please continue it.
I assuming his is your first time writing, it's good. More effort needed, except MC, other character look good to me. Story need to slow and explained. World Background null, give it a time.
Felt important so i think i should talk about this.
i know how important the mc of the story can be, some people do not like Azriel, so here are his character traits.
-he kills innocents.
-he is naive and reckless.
-he likes to fight and get stronger.
-he does not like to read.
of course, it will change in the future, he will be the one who leads the empire, a leader can't be a Brute who doesn't think anything.
He will change and get better.
Actually, he is already a lot better than before within 30ish chapters and will keep on improving as the story progress.
please be patient with him and me.
hmm hmm, that's all i wanted to say.
I hope have a great time reading.
It's funny how the #1 rated story, the one at the top of the voting pool for months, has somehow failed to be voted in. Literally over a million votes every single week and it's still not chosen. Guess our votes really don't matter.
Hi I’m a fan my name is lil Jin w Nobel man
I love the story of this novel, the MC is smart and hardworking, and doesn't look naive and I hope he's not naive or stupid, for the story I hope you don't overdo it like examples of medical skills that can bring people's deaths back to life and other things .