whoever translated this novel did a terrible job. i could not make heal or tail of most of the sentences. a lot of issues with gender pronouns.
The MC is too dumbMakes you think that he is just a puppet of the systemHe thinks cultivators are too poor and wants to borrow a broken mortal sword, even kids can tell that, with their strength earning mortal money should be too easy, yet the mc believes they are poor and covet the broken sword
good story and it has lot of potential continue to do good work
Needs more detailed synopsis because i don't know anything from that but he's a thief and is magical world so please give description for the novel
So This Novel Will Not Picked Up?
Its no more in the TRIAL READ nor in VOTING .
Don't get invested, he's barely started his other novel and take long and frequent breaks. Wait a few years to build up a stock before reading. Otherwise, it seems as good as his other novel, which despite my joke review, is pretty good.
The story has a great amount of potential. the writing quality is well done with minor errors. the chapter update are constant and aren't lacking. the story development is going pretty slow at the moment. character design is fine for the time being not many character at the moment. world background same as most story's like this beast, levels, strong beat the weak normal things.
I found this novel enjoyable with believable protagonists and antagonists. I feel that too many authors rely on lining up face slapping like dominos... while not empty of that trope, it wasn’t over the top and everything was pleasant to read.
huh? well what do I say... It's good(?) ... :/ yup it's very good. Keep writing! (sigh. one-hundered and fourty! Come-on! reach it already! phew)
Good stuff..if you can't stay hooked up,what is the point in reading..It is basically that kind which you will find interesting,if you r a wuxia reader...pretty good set up so far..
My review just personal opinion. It was well written story with nice world building and brilliant premises than other transmigrate in another world novel. BUT , I DECIDED TO DROP IT ! , The reason is:1. Author seem still trying tuning his story with asking reader opinion what to do. For some people it was plus because author's interactive, for me it's a mess! 2. He decided not to add harem. Maybe you will find this is good. Harem just make mc idiot or something. Let me tell you bro, it like the author wasting free resources, cultivation story is boring enough, level up then fight, level up again, why you stripped it from harem. Harem is a spices for MC boring life. It's his second chance!So for now that was my review. Maybe i will read it again when he adding HAREM tag ?️.Lastly im man of culture, im gonna say : able man without harem is like seeing pokemon but you had no pokeball. U know that feel bro?
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