Shameless Author Reviewing himself, because he really enjoys writing his novel. MC is stuck as an 5-year-old in game. It's different. When writing he can't decide what to call the game world so he left it blank. It was kind of his own stupid joke to just call it blank.
it's a Chinese novel do what you want with that information
Good book. Hope u continue with bigger chapters.
Good book. Hope u continue with bigger chapters.Good book. Hope u continue with bigger chapters.Good book. Hope u continue with bigger chapters.Good book. Hope u continue with bigger chapters.
WHEN R U COMING BACK TO KEEP WRITING???? THIS BOOK I GREAT AND I LOVE IT!!!! PLEASE COME BACK AND START WRITING AGAIN!!!!!
I had high hopes for this one but dropped at chapter 7. Weird MC, most things don't make sense and it all doesn't fit together.
An excellent book with very few gramatical and spelling mistakes. Rarely can an author tie together such a chaotic stream of events in a way that feels just as rushed for the characters as it does for the readers without losing the sense of meaning and the stability of the world. The only fault in the this novel (series?) is that there isn’t more available to read! Not sure why there were only 2 chapters of a volume 2 released with no further updates or info but I would love to see the next chapters in our titular characters’ lives.
Let's disregard the propaganda elements of this novel, and talk about the elephant in the room: character design.
The protagonist is a robot. He has no feelings, emotions, or beliefs of his own. Events happen, and the MC reacts to them. People approach the MC, he replies back. The protagonist doesn't even move of his own accord! Everything he does is a mission, the only difference is who the mission is being issued by. Sometimes it's from the government, other times it's from the system. A shounen protagonist is more three-dimensional than this idiot.
the story is quite good actually, just that it weirds me out how it has been set similar to a game or the fact that the sect elders can't verbally pass any Techniques and are looking forward to *unlocking* new maps
The story is well written and well paced with occasional extremely evocative imagery. Despite the cover and what the title implies, there is no R-18 content so far as I've read.
the world background is nice and detailed. u can actually see how the author would want his readers to see the world that the characters were living in.
the story is fantastic and the development is thrilling.
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This novel is perfect for beginners in light novel reading. A light emphasis on describing characters and enviroment. Room for improvement but definetely worth reading.