I very much enjoyed the novel. The hero was on a high level of personality, intelligent, a ruthless killer. Until chapter 21, things began to deteriorate because of the crazy girl who included him in his team. The dialogues between them are trivial, crazy and stupid. Also, his sexual relationship with her is a disgusting thing. His first team was good, obedient and without petty dialogues. Thank you for your effort. What ruined the novel is that crazy girl and the trivial dialogue with her, on the whole, she deserves 5 stars. The chapters were long and good.
So, to start, i like what ive read so far, up to chapter nine, but the system needs a little more explanations, and there seem to be some gaps every so often that can leave you puzzled.
Like the path the story is taking and the style is one of my favorite.
If I have to give a suggestion is to reduce a little bit the morons side of the story. This is the kind of young master owns the world and gets slap in the face, but this kind of characters should get a bit less story time to improve the pacing.
Also I feel a bit sad when we get 1 character that is so bad that ruins a good story, sometimes is the MC, other times is antagonist, in this one it’s is friend Leonel. The dude have a 5years old brain and no common sence and MC instead of educate him his supporting his decisions. please upgrade him to at least a 12 years brain so he can tell right from wrong!
Awesome story so far, definitely an interesting take on the genre. I cannot wait to see what the author has in store for us in the coming chapters!!
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A good start. The plot is a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of transmigration stories out there. The current short length might put you off now, but it's just starting, yes? And Author said that they already have the entirety of Volume 1 written out as well, so I'll be looking forward to that
this one is highly recommendable.
just to get it over, it have the classic elements, OP MC, knowledge about game, unfair advantage etc.
now that has been said, its still super good.
we have a MC who is not in this game to be the best, or to have revenge by dominating the game, but a young lad, who play the game to honor a good friend by enjoying it as much ad possible.
along the way we met some sidechic.... i mean side characters who each have their own personality and goals, which is kinda refreshing, they aint just follow-along wannabies as we seen before, because a MC need a stable 5man team.
this novel is among the few i always have on top ready to read more from, and if it continue along the path its on now, is one i will read for a long time.
fully recommended
It has some glaring weaknesses such as too many names and pwer ups thus reducng the quality of the story.
I suggest a rewrite it wll fef up your game
First, they should fix the character name in the blurb. Secondly, it's fairly different than the other Simulation novels. Instead of simulating the future in text, or making the MC live in a phantom world, this one lets the MC be multiple sidekicks of a VIP in their past. Kind of like being Alfred for a few years before Bruce Wayne becomes Batman, then switching to Robin's perspective, then Catwoman. MC just sees text of male or female sidekicks view of their lives, then gets rewards later.
The world doesn't seem very deep, but the simulator is the most complex one I've seen yet. Maybe to keep it from being overpowered like some other novels.
This oneI found was very good and a decent one at that. Hope it maintain it quality till the middle of the story. ......................................
Copy of the current Popular Novel? hmmmmmmm
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