Why are you confusing the genders pls? It's tiring having to go back and check always
This is a very interesting novel the characters are in sync. I love the way David and Courtney's relationship is developing. I recommend this novel for everyone to read.
Geez what a ride!! I really enjoyed reading this and wish there was more. This latest world is completely terrifying too. I kept getting chills up my spine everytime she didn't get off the train. It's just so eerie with the lack of information and how nothing feels safe.
It’s super far between chapters and the number or privileged chapters is stupid, not worth waiting for or reading only 1 chapter a week or 2. Should not have any privileges not worth it at all
I honestly enjoyed this story as of chapter 140. I only have 2 personal dislikes so far. 1. Although Mc Is Dragon, I'm kinda disappointed about his other half, I came into this novel expecting a full dragon, and although his other half makes him stronger than normal Dragons it still takes away a certain charisma he could have had. For example, His humanoid form it was really a letdown, at least for me. When that was revealed, i just didn't really like it, especially when people think he's just a regular Demi human. I find that a bit annoying.2. I waited forever for him to finally make it to Bahamut, and I gotta say that part was a huge letdown. Idk what i was expecting, but for him to just leave at chapter 140 even though he was there for months, the time skips made it feel really short. I guess I was expecting more connections between him and other dragons, which didn't really happen much partially due to him not being full dragon. I found that super annoying.
For inner-voice enjoyers. Entertaining before I stopped to pick it back up later when further chapters come. Fun series with focus on character reactions.
I dont really do reviews most of the time but to save people some time and effort of reading this trashy style of writing would be considered good karma.
The way the author writes line after REPETITIVE line of information where a useless Side-character would start a sluggish monologue of "blahh" thoughts is basically torture!!!! Writing just to "fill" the pages and reach a number count quota... PATHETIC. i mean sure, it would be fine mentioning how a side character would hate and describing how low he thought the main Mc was... but to keep repeating that damn idea not just for a few sentences... not just a few paragraphs... but a few chapters??! The story progression of a few seconds actually took whole Chapters. It wasnt even an important story arc!
If i could rate it lower than 1 star, i would.
Is... it just me that cannot... check the Author profile no matter how many times i touch it? Im using a phone(Phone)(Phone)
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Love this novel
and MC is Smart
I'm not good at explaining clearly
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The work has a very good idea. A well summarized but relatively strange synopsis may not please many, so I suggest you take a look at it later. I can't give too much of a review given there isn't much content available at the moment, however. here are some things about the work: The writing is normal/okay and doesn't get in the way, but it could be improved. Grammatical errors are constant and, if possible or necessary, I highly recommend using tools that can help you fix this. Also remember to improve the spacing you use between lines; in some situations it was a bit confusing to understand the descriptions.
The idea is cool and can be worked on to improve over time. I'll try to stay here on your journey, and I'll come back later to make further observations about the work. Finally, sorry for the somewhat "superficial" review, and keep up the good work.
It's a really good read. The fact that it's completely free and contains almost 500 chapters is an even bigger bonus. The world-building is a strong point, and the egocentric and frankly "villainous" character of the main character adds to the originality of the story. Some narrative devices may be a little overused, but overall it's good. I hope this story won't be abandoned, good luck autor!
They say that do not judge a book by it's cover, but Dayuuuum! You had me with just the cover. 5 stars! My review will be baseless, I just find the cover outstanding.