As far as im concerned, this is a good book by Einlion, and i have greatly enjoyed reading it so far. It remains to be seen how far the story will go, however, i do hope that the author doesnt lose motivation and sees the story to its completion, as someone who once tried his hand at writing, i am fully aware of how difficult of a challenge that is, so keep going and dont give up!
Terrible with character designs, how the world looks, time, and some plots but still enjoyable. If you can also ignore the basically constant grammar mistakes!While you might not mention skin tones to try and not be racist it is a major part of a character's design. You also never described the main MC(Walker), at least in the beginning. Maybe later you say more with him but this is over a thousand chapters in at that point.Aftet saying multiple of the issues to someone, they actually asked me why I'm still reading it due to how many flaws I listed.
Keep uo the good work Author !!. ?❤✊? I am honestly just really in love with female lead system novels that are NOT YURI! I am somehow uncomfortable with this genre , so i would be ecstatic if the author confirmed it even if i can see that it's not mentioned , well anyhow i hope the FL get with a nice guy that is slightly jealous and protective .
This was an awesome book, definitely not what I'm used to since I prefer fantasy and romance. This is a Sci-fi, medieval twist based novel. Excellent writing and perfect description of characters. For a character who thought he was ordinary, wasn't so ordinary at all. Great book. Short and sweet and descriptive.
I'm curious about the female figure at the beginning of the story who is said to be a mysterious figure who invites Sakamoto, what she said sounded very suspicious
The novel creates a story where the main character is born as an infinite powered god into a royal family. The mc isnt explicity told he has infinite power so he doesnt realize it, at all, even though his status shows he has infinity in every stat including money. The premise of the novel, the mc being infinitely op, which draws people in, is a blatant lie. sure, his status says “infinite” but he has no trouble controlling his strength, speed, or intelligence. he is also immortal but that hasnt even been mentioned. The writing is sub-par. the author uses spaces inbetween letters (ex. a a a a h h h h) which serves no purpose other than to increase the length of the chapter and to annoy the reader. this does not change, the author acknowledges the criticism and ignores it.The world building is great, like every novel with the previous charactersitics. The author places more attention to the world building then they do the actual main character.In my opinion, the author is trying to place the mc low on the progressiom spectrum to allow for more chapters, since authors dont know how to write an mc that doesnt train every couple of chapters, but there isnt any suspense of wonder to the result of the training. his training will be veiwed as pure idiocy later on so how could i care for it? The people he meets are interesting and he isnt sure about being their “master” which makes sense, thats weird, but he doesnt have any specialized connection to ant other character. he is fond of his sister but the most we read of it if a couple paragraphs. I assume the story picks up once he realizes hes op but i dont think it can come back from this redundancy of power scaling.
I enjoyed it. I wish I could write like this. this is what made me want to do science and look at stars and planets. this story was made in 1912. and it discovered the black hole.
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The essay switches on and off with feelings and ends with feelings. This makes the essay consistent and coherent, and at the same time, makes the theme of the essay repeat, which is highly infectious.
An excellent addition in the sci-fi genre. All those who has taste for sci-fi reading, come grab the book. As for me I am going to keep it my library for sure.
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The story is so beautiful. I am touched. I almost cried. Haha I love it. Gosh. I just don't like the alternative ending though coz it made me want to cry..