IDK..Seems like a ripoff to me (Im really a superstar). The world building makes no sense at all to me and the story is meh.Fillfillfillfill
The story flows very nice and clear! ? It kept me looking forward what will happen next! ? Many Characters with remarkable personalities.??????????
I would give less stars if I could, stupid system stupid MC stupid concept all around just a waste of time on everyone’ part... ….
This bs is cliche as hell, plz remove this and focus on translating dozens previously ongoing translations with the same fukin plot........................................................
sooooo, random bonus abilities that are not explained, ignoring some activities that should be XP, ridiculous plot holes, ever-changing history/backgroundim quite disappointed rn
I like it.fjkddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
Excellent book. Good pacing. Well thought out characters. World development is completely above par. Only thing lacking is speed on chapter release.
So far, it has been nice read. Nice pacing. Looking forward to more chapter releases.
Alryt, nice story I must say. Your writing quality is great. You got a nice flow I give u that. But you might want to cut down your paragraphs in your second and third chapter. Cos in those chapters, you have lots of important info... So making it long, made my head ache some more with my headache. I had to focus so much or I wud av lost what the paragraph was saying. Normally a paragraph shud b btw 3-5 if I am not mistaken. Little or no typos, great book n plotline author. It shows author knows what he is doing. Added to my library, would love to see where this is going. Nice work, keep it up.
Author of "Green Life" here! I would appreciate if you could rate my work if you enjoy reading it!!???------------------------------------------
This novels is average at best, grammar is horrendous with stiff and boring dialogue. what annoys me is that the author removes reviews below 4 stars...
Im usualy not a fan of mecha and all that kind of stuff but i have to say that you did a great job, i just love it, one of the best original work i found on this web site, thanks for the good read man ! keep it up !