Then Suzuki and the Misashi twin exchange their contact address
Shirohime : 'SHE' said the same thing and that it was possible her doing in messing up with the intending people's memories manipulating them...
" Okay. You're good. Let's move on to the stunts."
Once Richard heard Jaculas' reminder, colour immediately drained from his face.
Maria seems to be feeling the same. She reached with her hand and took the semen that escaped her womb and licked it from her hand
A woman in a business attire approach the young man and said, "Master, the organization is on the move"
Even the man on the highest Throne could not sit easily. Despite sitting his fingers were tightly gripping the arm of the chair. He was looking at the person with astonishment.
I had very high hopes starting this book...... long story short it was not up to par. The story is pretty interesting at first but thats it.... ive read up to chapter 150 and i am still not happy. There is no depth to the story and instead the story bounces all over the place and get dragged out way to long. It shouldn't take 5 chapters to describe one event that doesn't pertain to the main story arc. The word building is excellent and has a lot of potential, however its ruined by the low end story telling and if your looking for action, you'll find some every 25+ chapters.....
Forgive me guys I know its bad but I decided not to fix and finish it and straight up published it right away for fun so don’t bother reading it, it will definitely waste your time (if i have more motivation then I will revamp this story)
Shameless Author review! :OOOO >:(((I hope Y'all Are enjoying the story as it goes on, I'm A newbie writer so Any tips on how I can make the story better are appreciated!
j'qdore lire ce livre .L'histoire est intéressant et les personnage sont attrayante
The story is Pretty predictable in the beginning. Poor kid wants to be the most powerful. We've all read the books and look forward to it. It probably isn't a bad read. I couldn't convince myself to continue on the Magi start casting spells. It's so cringe worthy that after the repeat Magi called out the spell rank and attribute I completely lost interest. This novel has potential, but it's lost on me.