These MMORPG type novels are a good innovation and great ideas for the future generations to imply on. These are indirectly making the future bright by larady foreshadowing the events
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I actually don't know why Hollywood directors' story writers are so confident that their MCs will be trusted to directly direct films with big expenses.
Mc is a beginner, 18 years old, his first foray into the world of film and he asked to become a director.
no matter how good the story script the mc has, people in the film world will not believe it so easily.
It's good that the manuscript wasn't just taken, we all know how copyright works.
okay this author has really done his part in this novel well to be honest it's a little underrated the mc is not your typical guy and nothing is as it seems so give it a try
The idea is not bad at all. The biggest problem I have with this is writing quality (grammar and such, that's why I only put 3 stars for writing quality). Some sentences are completely incoherent. Author, you really need editor to check and fix your text (it seems you're not native English speaker).
I could help, but it's not my native language as well, so you'd better ask/look for someone anyway.
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All 10000 times novels are TRASH AND I LOVE THEM
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While it’s a great parody,
But bad notes first, the novel gets more and more harem like, without having the tag, and I find myself losing interest as it does. I didn’t sign up for a harem. And the fact that he’s getting it one with his cousin not cousin…
I also had a problem with the sheer lack of important male characters. All the important ones are female. And any male characters are unexplored footnotes, easily replaceable.This highlights the harem feel.
As a side note, the MC should lose sometimes. It adds depth to the character.
On the good notes, the novel has great promise. It really gives you perspective on power-levels without having to state it. You just get a feel for how strong people are and the potential out there.
Also, the world building is great so far, and it has solid character design as I can see. I want to see more. I want to see outside of just the school. I also can’t wait to see more political aspects being explored. Like a game of thrones feel.
Currently, I think the novel has some good pacing.
Story has a lot of potential and as a fan I will urge you to update frequently. I really want to know what he’ll do with the Ultimate military system.
Giving myself five stars is shameless, but I think I deserve it.I've put a lot of thought into this novel, many future events are already planned with foreshadowing in the current chapters, so look out for them.In this review, I will highlight what you can expect from my novel, although I'm a newbie novelist, I can guarantee you that my novel has excellent writing, and character design.This novel's story is based on a mix of many genres and novels, novels such as Rebuild world, TOPAV, and small elements from Legendary mechanic, and genres such as Sci-Fi ; Fantasy.The world it self is a mix of futuristic and post apocalyptic, so a cyberpunk like world.I'll plan to update atleast once a day, everyday, for a while, only missing days when I'm too busy.As for the many of you who ask if there is going to be a harem or not, let me answer you now.Probably not, it depends on how the story would go tbh, since I'm not set yet on the female characters he will be meeting and how their stories would go.The romance will start later into the story and no it wont be the focus, not in the least, so for now atleast, harem haters don't worry too much, as there is one FL in mind.The story starts of slow, with big revelations about the world at the end of the first volume, I'm republishing my novel, so if you are a reader coming back from my old one, then hello, good to see you again, and for new readers, welcome and I hope you enjoy reading my story.
This story is really good man, keep it up.I will definitely follow each chapter of this incredible work.I'll be waiting for the next one, see you later.Bye.....
Top tier novel!Can't wait to read more of Michael's story. It's a really good and exciting start.Will keep coming back to give a more detailed review.