Huge focking spoiler, don't read this... I just have to talk about it. Omfg the betrayal of the fire and wind warriors made me cry, and yes it's totally a betrayal stupid author.
I’m on ch154, the ML is like a pedo!! In this world people live to 300, you’re not an adult until 30, the ML is 40 FL is 17! At first he was lamenting he has to wait for 13years, 2 weeks later he’s sneaking in her room, calling her a vixen while she’s sleeping and don’t he’s there!!! Give her a couple outfit to wear on their date?!?! While on the date trick her into kissing him???? She doesn’t say how old she was when she died, but still her body now is 17!!! i will continue reading to see how it goes, it was a good story but the last 4ch kind of shocked me with how shameless perverted the ml was suddenly
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typical Chinese story, well if you don't count the protagonist's lack of pride and how he prefers to be the girl in the relationship
You also have to unlock it from chapter 17
not recommended, just a loss
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Before any idiots go and say this is a rip off Red Packet Server, this book was released on the 17th July 2016 and Red Packer Server came out 29th August 2016. Unless you’re an idiot, you should stop your blabbering about this being a rip off.
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If you're into dual cultivation su yang novel,you would definitely love this as this novel ngl is alot more better as the story pacing + development have been really well done plus all the girls that was introduced into the harem have well written character setting + background story. 10/10 story that you won't regret reading!
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Among all the books we've translated so far, this one is different! It is easy-to-read and the author tells the story in a light, funny way.
Yes, there's another OP protagonist in this book, but the exclusive idea is that the Martial Soul of the protagonist "sucks"!
Come check it out!
Fun Fact: the author is still releasing new chapters on a daily basis, and some of our translators are so obsessed by this book that they stay up late to binge-read the latest chapters.☺
Reading up to Ch22, it is hard to read. The situation changes are abrupt. Sometimes time would pass suddenly without indication - in one paragraph it is one date, and next, it is suddenly the future. Sometimes the PoV would change abruptly. The living conditions, his location, there is no smooth transition. I have had to re-read the passages to infer things. The relationships he has (he has only 2) are unclear. The only thing that is clear is that world is strong eat the weak and he is very weak. An example, in ch22 he has some people collected outside his house (probably). There is no clear indication if they are grouped outside his door, you can infer but it is confusing.
It needs some serious editing.
Sorry but for this one o have to say It in my language. Puta que pariu, que história maravilhosa, bem escrita (como as demais do mesmo autor) e que deixa o leitor avido pela continuação parabéns.[img=update]