Never thought I'd see a reverend insanity copy, with the self cultivating abilities trope, Chinese author's are truly shameless uncreative copying b*sard's
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Hopefully, this novel is a better version of "Legend of the Mythological Genes
There's a problem with the writing. The english itself is fine, but the pacing, focus, and rational are all sub-par.Pacing - There are 3 chapters before the official chapter 1 that are glossaries of terms and information about the world, and this is a definite red flag. 1) This is a terrible way to start a story. I don't want to do homework in order to read a novel for leisure. 2) If this is neccessary to understand the story, then you have failed as a writer. You need to show the audience, not tell them. That's the difference between a story and a textbook. 3) Revealing all these details is a part of storytelling. Dumping them all in the beginning simply means you can't use their revelation to further your story. Discovering things with the MC is one of the joys of reading a book, and now you've robbed us of that experience to some extent. 4) By talking about the X levels of your world and how people struggle to climb them, you not only told us the end point of your story, but informed us that we're going to have to read what is basically the same story X times. Another mystery dead and a promise of an endlessly repetitive story.Focus - You need to trim the fat. Details, such as the fact that the MC came in his pants after his first feeding, either need to be cut out or utilized to further the narrative. I believe you were attempting to show how overwhelming of an experience his first feeding was, but you didn't go into enough detail for this fact to be anything other than a distraction. You basically skimmed through the fact that he was exhausted, breezed through his emotional state, and then described in detail the tent in his pants and the stain from his ejaculation. 1 graphic detail amongst a few brief ones sticks out like a sore thumb, and just because it's about a sexual organ doesn't make your novel more "*****."Rational - "Because the information might put you in danger" is not a constructive reason to deny a amnesiac character information about THEMSELVES. That's basically saying "because the author doesn't want the audience to know." You talk about enemies and danger as if covering your eyes will somehow make them go away. All it does is render the MC helpless to avoid these dangers and force him to stumble face first into them due to ignorance.
I am not sure why this was picked up for translation. The story is on hiatus since 2018 Jun 01. Well lets hope the ride till there is a good one.
The novel is awesome. The mc is op AF ???!!! I love how the author wrote the mc previous life into his reincarnation. very well done???!!! Keep the chapters coming!!!
Couldn't give myself less stars. Anyways, here are some things you need to know about the novel:1. The novel has a good plot. I have a very interesting background in mind for the world building.2. There would be many lovemaking scenes.3. No dreams are smalls. 4. It is a partly wish fulfillment. 5. MC is overpowered 6. MC has a dual identity which is hinted in first two chapters.7. There would be both virgins and non-virgin woman in the novel.8. The main girls would have fleshed out personality instead of robotic personality
This is too funny! A system with the mission to annoy and ship the host into BL relationships. The chapters are short but many chapters released at once make up for that. Love it so so much.
Gud one... Idk what more to write, but the review need one hundred and forty character, so I am writing whatever is coming in my mind. Again cool story manga..........
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Really liked the first 7 chapters and I thought the main character was admirable. But that might have been because we didn't actually read much about the main character.The first things he does in the new world is kill, kill, kill. Nothing but death and destruction while expanding his base. This is where my mind started screaming no no no! Because I quite liked the story so far and wanted more.Then he decides that he wants to remain secret despite letting people escape his assaults and thinks to make use of goblins. Which like usual are the enemy of mankind.So while he's expanding his territory he sets the goblins on at least one village. I almost stopped reading when he thought of his plan but decided to keep on for a bit hoping it wasn't true. Then he actually called on the goblins. That's where I stopped reading.
Why do all the low rated books have the most top fans. good books wid good ratings don’t get selected bcoz of these. Are these top fans even real ppl or is it just one rich guy pushing things