Awesome story so far, would love to see where it goes................... ................................................................. . .
This novel is actually kind of unique. It is a decent twist on the whole Reincarnation schtick.The only thing that makes me wary about this novel is that it seems like cultivation will make an appearance. Cultivation novels are definitely boring for me.Overall it is decent though.
MC has OCD and dies because he scored a non integer number on his test, causing him so much distress he walked into a car that was unfortunately still in motion. The cultivation world is what it would be like if every cultivator was a master teacher. Plus said master teachers also studied advanced mathematics. Can the world hold up? I think it will. But the Mc has his fun little cheat that makes thing wonky, in a world where logic rules, how does one slacker with no potential use luck to break reality into his favor? Find out now! Sadly the love interest isn’t a Loli, not that they’ll be well established for a while, but still. That’s like 50% of the value of a novel. I hate it when guys go for these older disgusting and expired women.
I'm worried for the author's health. I think he needs to go and get checked for Alzeheimers.Fairly decent concept ruined by the execution and the author. The writing style is very dry and exposition-heavy, focusing on telling without showing. The author also has literal short term memory loss. For example, in one of the first 4 chapters, the author has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool. In the 5th chapter, he has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool (Yes, you did read that right and no, I did not mistype that. I am simply repeating what the author said). There are also already tons of plot holes and inconsistencies within the mere first 5 chapters, so I will be dropping this novel.
Hi potential readers,The strength of this novel quality:- Unique story- Variety of weapons- MC starts from the bottom and train/battle a lot- Multiple females from different race: Demon, Human, even Succubus- Very funny conversation if you are Asian/Chinese descendant- Many Myth will appear inside the novel- This novel is made like a manga, fits better for who often imagine the scene- Very unique world background systemFeel free to try it and leave comments.Thanks Mina-san
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Surprisingly bad... I thought The Almighty Ring would be the worst web novel I would read in 2019, but I was proven very wrong.I'm not sure how much of the problems with this story can be attributed to the translator and editor versus the author, but there are tons of problems. The writing is downright unreadable at times. It feels like entire paragraphs or even chapters worth of vital information missing. I only tolerated a few chapters before dropping this series, but I was already lost and confused by chapter 2. Details are inconsistent and contradictory.Where is the narrative? Did the MC even die? Why doesn't he seem remotely bothered or confused by the fact he went back in time? Is this a normal thing? That "betrayal" wasn't even slightly dramatic, leaving me wonder what the big deal was at the end of the first chapter. Everything appears to be action, which is fine for an action fan like me, but there's no description to go along with that action. It's just "Boom! Things happened" and "MC got this bonus."What little information is given about the MMORPG doesn't make a lick of sense.... Seriously, what is even going on?I'm not sure this can even be considered to have any story development. The story is technically there but, development? No. The pacing is very fast, but there's no narrative or anticipation. Even though a handful of side characters got introduced quickly, there character-establishing moments are weak, and the characters have no depth. The MC definitely has no depth.I'm shocked this even got approval for a translation.
don't care for system novel, don't like when a mc is so op and has all the advantages like a true son of heaven, don't really care for harems. the quality is good enough. haven't read in less than a week I've already forgotten like every character though to be fair I didn't read too deeply (had to go finish another novel(lord Xue Ying)) but i did feel at the time there was a couple cliches and that things were too easy and fortunate for the mc. on the topic of the mc I think he's not the worst but could be more compelling, especially as early as I was in, just some advice I guess for a future novel that the early chapters especially when that's where the most people will be able to see it you have to really captivate readers, and while the novel wasn't bad in any way, it didn't captivate me early like my favorite novels would. don't take any offense for the mid score it's just my little take and it doesn't matter much since I didn't read too far, maybe I'll check out this novel again in the future.
Pros:Harem, yes for harem lovers this is one of the best or the best harem novels in my opinionSmut is well writtenCharacter development✅World building✅Smart/Lucky protagonist✅Consistent updates✅Cons:Look up
an exciting tale about a man and his road through acknowledging, understanding and accepting his fate, his mission across lives and time, and how he is not alone in it.
I haven't even read the novel. Just the synopsis. But for that I'll give you a five star. I'm still reading Lord of the Mysteries. After finishing I'll give your novel a go. Bro, one thing. Put reader's first, fine. But don't get tired from all the posterior ends in the platform who complain about every single thing. Pace the novel well so that you don't get tired from writing. Character development, plot, grammar, everything can be learnt from experience. This is just your first novel. Take into consideration your mentality too. Don't get too tired so that you leave it without end. Take a hiatus. So many authors who had good ideas or potential for a story, stopped after some time cuz people where blabbering about character development and stuff. They tried to please the readers whithout thinking of themselves and got tired so they stopped the novel.
Teacher : How old is your father ?Kid : He is 6 years oldTeacher : What? How is that possible?Kid : He became my father only when I was born.. Logic!!