Yes, it's Kazuma. _________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sounds like a chick novel disguised as male novel because author made main protagonist a male, even though we all know this is a fml novel. Seems like a waste.
I really enjoyed reading this, although I am a bit disappointed about the latest chapter since I'm hoping it's not just going to restart the whole story and go back to the beginning after all the progress the mc made while figuring out a bit about his system.
well dropping it.
MC has no personality that make him protagonist but a pathetic loser who don't even try. And the girl character is shown too needy.
Fight scenes are so confusing and complex that you will find it hard to understand.
really awesome story love it. I have a sick and twisted mind so i enjoy reading this book a lot just wish you would continue bruh wanna read moreee...its so entertaining and awesome....
I’ll be honest I have been generous is my rating. But i want to support this novel as I find it much better then many others. I like the story, I like the fact the MC is not bloodthirty since the start and has flaws, and I like how the theory of the word has been well though.
What I think that needs to be improved.
Generaly the english (for a non-native) is better than many novel out there, but some passage miss a verb or we go from present to using past and it makes the reading a bit complicated. In addition the explainations of the world theory are sometimes confusing wich is sad as we can guess the author put a lot of efforts in it.
The plot is a bit forced and the swich to different point of view/secondary characters without a clear introduction or cut makes the reading sometimes very difficult (but still the story is better than many out there!)
The only thing that really makes me furous is to see how cluless the MC is of the world outside. I know he is a dropout but still he must has been exposed at school or home in is pre-teens to all the magical parts of his world ... right now it feels he is as clueless as the reader regarding magic wich is in my point of view absolutely not normal and possible. This makes the MC looks stupid sometimes and I found it irritating.
Keep going author! Writing is not easy! I wish your success.
Interesting read, so it might be good for it to go forward. MC is OP right now to those who are wondering, not sure if it's going to keep on being that way.
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I really love this novel, the world building, the tweak you did with the beast types (clever, very clever)though I don't love seeing that harem tag though that's the only thing spoiling his story for me.
I like the "old veteran" type of of MC. The protagonist is already experienced, sometimes power progression feels a little repetitive so skipping all that 'growing up' character development can make it easier on the readers. But it comes at the cost of the person's innocence. A typical young and naive MC can feel a little stupid at times but we can be immersed in their individual perspective and character developments and understand why a character would make certain kinds of choices afterwards. By literally combining the 2 into the same body I feel happy getting the best of both worlds. Evin utilizing the valuable wisdom that comes with age while also experiencing moments of first time innocence and ignorance is just so adorable.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?