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Haha don't know where to begin with this one. A very fun read with a plot that is still developing at the point I stopped reading. Humor is the driving force in this one with some terrific banter and dialogue coming through with the zany character interactions. I especially enjoyed the prologue chapter with the FBI-like group of aliens meeting to discuss some concerning events. Very well-written with great flowing prose. This is one talented author with a very vivid imagination at play. I've added this to my library as I have to see where he goes with all this. Anybody thinking about reading this, give it a go! You're guaranteed to have many laugh out loud moments!
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Please update the chapters and release more. The story was good........
I have been waiting for so long but then also no new chapters appeared. Please update them.
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If your going to MTL, you need to have good editors. Names change from paragraph to paragraph. Nothing is consistent. There's full blown untranslated paragraphs. An entire chapter is repeated with slightly different translation. It's a mess.
The sorry itself is nothing to write home about either. Constantly retconning itself; "I gained a lot of experience, and in fact I had taken a 5x experience portion too, that I made with ingredients I bought and never mentioned any of that until after it had already happened."
The MC supposedly has future knowledge, but it almost never comes up after the very beginning. The MC's sister is a big concern, then ignored completely. The MC is so OP so quickly there's never any tension. The stats system doesn't get much mention, even though stats are such a big deal, and supposedly the MC is gaining extra points during level up sometimes, those are mentioned once and then never again in the preview 40 chapters.
It was already a mess, then it was poorly translated on top of that.
If you're going to make your MC a stereotype at least stick with it like it feels like he wants and pursues trouble.
Is Just me who is missing some explanation at the start???
Its Just starting… Out of nothing…
A novel that did the premise of picking up "attributes" and things from other people just right. This too also had good potential for nationalism, but again webnovel decided that mutant succubus was better???
Note: Updating Stability and World Background will be set to 5 stars since this is a review made when it was still a trial read.
Writing Quality(4stars):
It's pretty decent, haven't a lot of problems with it
Story Development(4stars):
Pretty good, I like the idea. The MC's phone cheat isn't uncommon, but I like how it's done. The plot is basically him raising a pet store, hopefully it stays that way unlike other pet store novels.
Character Design(4stars):
Characters aren't paper cut-outs, well at least from what I've read.