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I love it! This novel deserves so much more attention! I´m sure that with more chapters and a little bit more time this novel will become something big! I hope the author doesn´t drop it. I think this novel has a bright future! Thank you for your work until now author!
This is much more interesting then most others this week.This is much more interesting then most others this week.This is much more interesting then most others this week.
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I like the style of the writer and the ideea he had for the book. The characters are pretty interesting and I hope they will have and intriguing development! For readers who have tastes like me, I recommend the book! ?For the others, I also recommend the book. ?
it is a decent story however there is a lot of racism in it as you get further into it. I read the raw version of it up to chapter 385.
Its an average novel. Minir grammar errors. It is a bit odd how the MC is unfazed withhis transmigration. The characters are cheery and helpful even though they also got transmigrated, and stuck in a completely new world. Just feels really off with the character development. Mc has no awareness or caution at all. Up to you if you wanna continue but im dropping.
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Chapter 3 and it's already a struggle to continue reading.
Main character can travel to other worlds that aren't explained at all. Main character for some reason knows common knowledge of these worlds. (Author never mentioned how he got this "common knowledge", and never explained this "common knowledge" to the readers either)
The humor in this novel is awful. It's just a bunch of gay jokes.
Translation quality isn't that great either, some parts of the story are even missing.
Plot is a mess, full of holes. Can it even be called a plot hole if the entire story is swiss cheese?
Overall, garbage-tier novel. Theres a terrible amount of plot holes in the first three chapters and a bunch of things that just make you go "Huh?". Don't recommend.
This novel is going to very interesting and fun to read❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
This novel is in the top 5 of the novels that I have ever written.
I even read it myself (mostly for editing but that is not the point).
Jokes aside, give it a try (〃￣︶￣)人(￣︶￣〃)
Some chapter are like X happend then next chapter they do X again but change the place, how people meet etc. Like author had 2 ideas but forget about it. Nobody ever proof read it and its awful.
some chapters are in the wrong order.
That kind of poor work is becoming more and more popular on webnovel.......
Its sad cause master/disciple are one 9f my fav stuff