this look like it's going to be pure chaos and i love chaos
my understanding from your description is that an mental unstable person have a voice in his/she? head die for some reason now got a system too resulting in pure chaos lets hope I got it right
this is a dreat novel with a new and refreshing idea that till now i think is implemented beautifully.
so i hope to see this through and for it to be a long term project.so keep at it author.
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Ahh....this one give me a true meaning of life...after graduating and all. the true battle is not at school, you will see the true meaning of life once you face out the out side world alone striving hard to reach where you want to be. I love this thank you for this, Keep it up I will look forward to this more.
This novel had a very good start, an eagle clone as a separate body is a very interesting concept. This part is surprisingly well done for such a mediocre novel.
But let's start from the beginning.
The world is a standard Cultivation world, with a death zone full of treasure only the MCs clone can access. Not much detail about either the world or the Cultivation system. MC is your standard OP genius who was held back by fate, or in this case his soul was to talented for his body. His childhood friend, a beautiful genius, helps him survive until he gains strength.
The whole thing has been done before, but there are enough twists to make it interesting.
But here the trouble starts, standard enemies popping up everywhere because he is seen as trash and everyone else is so bored they can only pick on him every time he meets someone new. Classic repeat, MC either kills them or shuts them up with his strength. Classic village noop destroying the strong forces backed seniors. Every character is either a villain, a week damsel to be safed, a pin-up senior, a pin-up teacher, a pin-up childhood friend or something else for the MC to ****, kill or turn into a servant. No character besides the MC has a worthwhile backstory, consistent motivation or anything unique.
MC has powerful friends(even in higher positions in other sects) , a pretty talented childhood friend, nearly unlimited wealth and every opportunity he needs, but he still goes the standard scumbag rout of trying to get every girl he comes across.
In one moment he is a wise, experienced man who can endure hardship, in the next he randomly kills a minor annoyance and in the next he riskes his life to either gain a girl's attention or to gain prestige. He literally risks his life to kill a snake stuck in a mountain to impress a girl he has seen twice. He could have run in the beginning, after saving her or anywhere in between, but no, he has to show that he is dangerous so that anyone in the world can get a shot at him.
In between, the auther even forgot that the MC had a clone for like 20 or so days.
Beware, starving of small animals.
The Harem route and the typical stupid villains destroy this novel.
Atleast use your orginal cover and NC disciption.
This novel is BS.
I will not recommend to both Old and New reader.
ONE OF THE WORST MC..
really fun novel to read. I'm a huge fan of kingdom building types of novels and the fact it fits in with a cultivation type of novel makes if all the more interesting to me. Story development so far has been good so please keep up the good work
Interesting plot love the characters the the creation the story development, great work indeed, definitely saved in my library,?love this book even though it's not my type of genre I love it ?KEEP IT UP AUTHOR!!
Turn off your brain for some stereotypical nationalistic racist work. All the other countries are doing bad except blank country. Replaced china with the US, but it makes no difference. Also you’ll notice that another story about the encryption one is also in the US randomly. And both characters are named Raymond. So with this we can assume it’s just translating choices so we dont go “oh another stereotypical china is best” . Also repeated chapters 3x so far
If you want to read about a brainwashed Mc be my guest.I don't care about the development, it happened because the MC was brainwashed. His free will and personality is gone. In its stead we have a goody 2 shoes.
I think the author got his martial artist idea from Swallowed Star, as I am getting the same vibe from this novel, but on entirely different level.
tell me how there is a manhwa in the process of being written on this novel when it hadn't been updated in 3 months. the novels is great however and I recommend it. I hope the author doesn't drop it.