Get past the first 10 chapters before you judge the book. The translation quality is consistently getting better as the author/translator gets more fluent with English.
Alright, now that that's out of the way. This book is very well written and will drag you into the world. I just binged all the chapter available in one go. I will definitely continue to support this author!
He is very good at depicting the characters in an authentic way. He builds the world setting well and doesn't make you fall asleep doing it. I love how you slowly get a feel for the world as the MC discovers how different everything is away from her home planet. I would suggest this book for anyone interested in sci-fi and magic!
I'm a final year doctor in training here. read the 1st 30 chapters & gotta say pretty interesting as the novel theme & writing is also done with good supportive knowledge about the surgical field
I really like the story, if like me you are looking for something dark with the story having an impact on you this is worth a read.There was a part where the writing quality wasn't that great but I belive it is getting fixed and overall it is still above average. For me the story shines brightest in the story heavy chapters where the writing is on top.The characters are interesting with unique design, sometimes their interactions feel a bit shallow and lacking but overall enough to enstablish most of them as individuals.But regardless of some work in progress flaws (it is still the authors first work), this is my kind of story and I am exited for the second Arc :)
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This was a pretty good story. I of course loved the main characters and their character growths . I was a bit confused during all the fighting towards the end, because they kept jumping from scene to scene but all in all it was a good story. The ending feels a little unfinished, but it also can end there.
At the first chapter I feel like there is no special feeling to this story and in the second chapter I feel like WoW this is great.also, since the first chapter I can see that you have a lot potential in writing because your writing skill is so good.
The life of this MC sounds kind of ideal to me. Not that poor of a financial situation, occasional interactions with kids, a RPG in real life, and the best of all, living as an otaku!
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Maybe it's just me, but what can I say, everyone has different preferences to live their way of life.
Every chapter had me on the edge of my seat.The author thinks like me. I have no way to prove it, but just know that the way he explains and shows his ideas are unparalleled in any other story I have read so far. It's to the point that I'm actually spending money to have more content to read. This novel... is everything I wanted to read in a story. It has realism, fantasy, philosophy, psychology, and more. All to make you think, understand, entertain, and understand you as a person.this is more than just a story. To me, it's both the story I always wanted to create and the story I always wanted to read. It's my beliefs brought to life in a story, so addicting that I want to never stop reading.the only unfortunate thing is that I'm not rich. Otherwise, I would be this stories #1 supporter.so trust me when I say... you gotta read this. Even if you don't value it the same way I do... it's still a great story to read.
Nice, One of best R-18 novel i have read this far. Mc a ruthless and calm mind, mature, and loving person.
MC is fast cultivating,
MC is not killing machine, who fight and killing every chapter.
Lot of women with different types of personality.
Older women love interest.
The idea behind this story is good and I'm of the opinion that if the author keeps with the story to completion then they will have a fantastic first draft.
That said the author tells the readers what's happening rather showing. This doesn't allow the reader to deeply immerse themselves in the story. I think this also contributes to the pacing problems of the story.
Over all if you don't mind that this is a fledgling author then I believe this to be a promising story and hope the author will continue writing it.
I really like this novel. It has a completely unique premise. The MC is not the transmigrator with the golden finger; instead, the transmigrator is his golden finger. Unfortunately,I, I don't think it will be chosen. Is there anywhere I can continue reading?