Nice novel to read & so inspirable story for our life. I learnt many things from this story that how to handle yourself in critical situation in front of entire community.
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Poor writing quality.
Terrible world building.
No character description.
The story feels like an MTL, obviously written by someone who doesn't have a good grasp of the English language.
The only thing I can recommend to the author:
Please read other high quality books, the only way to improve your writing is to read, English books.
This book is amazing. Great character development. You can feel the way the MC thinks. Author has really written a master piece here. It is simply a work of art! Author, please don't drop this novel. ALL I WANT IS MORE!!!
I want to remind everyone who is reading this book.A newer, higher-quality version of GINKEN is available. It can be found on Webnovel with the working title GINKEN: Ember in the Storm.Most people would consider the new edition to be a brand-new entry in the series. It follows a sequence of events and improves some of the awful quality. I would suggest giving anime a shot if you share my enthusiasm in it. (Note: The early arcs are really an embellishment; the story actually begins at Golden Wasakona.)I appreciate the people who stand with me.
Hello, I am the author.The rhythm of the novel starts a bit slow, but then it picks up and I think it becomes exciting.I have tried to make the characters vivid and believable. I don't like to create a villain who is simply evil and idiotic, nor an MC like that.I focus quite a bit on the characters and their emotions, so there will be several characters who have emotions and thoughts that can be seen in the novel.I think there are many exciting and a bit strange elements (For example, different layers of the system, which can connect with other users, and exotic powers of different people like a necromancer who uses teleportation magic).The world is wide and I try to bring it to life, showing different events in the work, for example descriptions of scenes that happen in other places in the world or universe.
The novel is just regular in the first two chapters and then bam! The action starts, everything is good and am really hooked but if i may suggest, i'd like to author to cut down the paragraphs a bit.
I can’t just give a 5 star review, but from what I’ve read this novel is very promising. I would like to ask for at least an update a month though since people might just stop reading if there’s nothing new for too long?
Trash.. that's as far as I can say.
Everything is predictable in this novel. The clichés and tropes are all here. Cheat, old pervert grandpa, accidentally acquiring peak world cultivation technique etc. The author loves to repeat a thing for 5 paragraphs in different ways. MC learnt a technique that the existence at the peak of the world couldn't learn because of his FOCUS, lol. What the author loves to do too is force the MC to do things, like saving some female degenerate just to get him in trouble, or going to a university that's supposed to be the backyard of his enemies even though he knows of it. You know all that "forced" stuff.
MC: calm, and a wood bloke. that's all nothing more. honestly Im trying but I just can't think of more.
Side characters: the only redeeming character for even a bit is probably that young master that pretended he was someone he's not just to fool his family. But the rest is ugh don't make me start a rant on his family or step-family makes me want to burn the book.
Oh and this book supposedly isn't harem not sure though since I haven't read very deep into the novel but it keeps giving me this On and Off harem thing. Or maybe I'm just too paranoid?
I don't feel it's worth doing in depth review, just not worth it.
Anyways don't recommend at all.
This novel is just fantastic, I'm can see a few grammar errors but isn't that bad, loving the idea of the novel, I'm love any novel with craft system
If you ignore the obvious logical fallacies every few chapters because the book wasn't preplanned in the slightest (for example: it took like 15 chapters after breakthrough to reveal what True Element mc cultivated. Until then it was just described as True Element) Then it is a good read when you want to turn your brain off and read how a guy pubstomps noobs then this is for you. Idea 8/10, execution 4/10.