Fun but worrying start. The MC and characters are pretty cliche and not in a good way. The story abruptly starts and there is little in the way of confusion, panic, or really any emotion from not just our MC but all the people involved. I'm not a fan of the happy slave trope which this novel leans into hard. That said I am still enjoying it so far. I probably won't keep reading it for long.
There are also translation issues that for the most part aren't too bad but an entire chapter is missing and there is some bits that are hard to follow (like what is supposed to be offensive about the last name of the family he meets in his second world visit???).
There’s a high chance that this novels name should be changed to “I Can Pick Up Powers From The Novels I Plagiarized”
Since most authors rate their novel 5 stars, I shall do the same right?
surely not looking for any excuse to rate my story 5 stars... surely not.
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Now then as every author would like to say, please check out my novel and be patient with it. I would take all constructive criticism and try to improve upon them.
As English is not my mother tongue so there could be structural mess but it'll get better I promise. Lastly please vote my novel with power stones so web novel knows that you're enjoying what you're reading and don't forget to add it to the library. ( I definitely did not copy that line from a youtube channel... ahem)
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It was good novel you know new concept etc but it quickly become boring.
Because of few things first of all there is racism in this novel(obviously). All the 'criminal origination' and 'kidnapping' is done by foreign people .
You can ignore that part but you can't ignore the story development everything is happening around the MC.
You would say because he is the mc! right ?
No story development is not done around the MC for example A competition is arrange and mc ' chiche ' there that's normal, because mc needs to travel but if mc in two places (Yes just two in whole novel) and everything happens around him. It becomes boring.
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Pretty good novel, I haven't seen this sort of novel before, wuxia+dungeon defense.
Anyways MC died 3k years ago, and now partially revived, but needs to kill intruders to regain strength.
To lure intruders into his tomb he has a system that's pretty much does the dungeon defense bit.
His disciples from 3k years ago are bigshots who want his legacy.
Review from C15.
Writing: it's translated, so there are some problems but nothing major.
Stability: the story has been completed, so no new updates.
Development: there are some annoying time skips, and pacing sometimes runs wild, but the overall plot is excellent. The only fault is that the last three chapters (647.1, 647.2, and 648) break it all and leave you sad.
Character design is fantastic. You can see MC's journey from human to serpent. One can grow to appreciate even minor characters like Squirrel or Giant Turtle, probably it's just me, but somehow I could never really care about secondary human characters even if they are attractive.
World background is really extensive and complex. The only thing one can fuss about is a complete lack of reason or diplomacy between superpowers. Later on, countries just want to slap each other because yes.
Though it sounds like it would be a good story I was confused once I saw that before he had transmigrated, he had been betrayed. Then in the synopsis tags and says " -lifetime companions" and "-no loner mc". This actually threw me off from wanting to read, how would you have an mc who's been betrayed by his closest friends and killed by them, reincarnate as a spoiled young master and have him go and still look for lifetime friends and not be a loner mc
This story is very intriguing, i love stories with systems, and this one is off to a great start, I like the concept and the mc, I can see the effort placed into the story, it is well written and deserves its five stars. Keep up the good work
I really like the idea and think the personality of the protagonist is a good match. It's well written and I can see the effort put that's been put in this book. I am looking forward to what comes next, as there have only been a couple of chapters so far. But I'm confident it will bring many enjoyable adventures
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