This is a great book and you will fall in love with it after you read a few chapters. the character development is nice and the humorous is pretty good. but all I ask if for is a petition for a second book, this book is that good. you feel empty when you finish it, it doesn't just add up and at the end of the day you will want a book 2.
I’m looking forward to how you make formations relevant to our mc cultivation journey. A interesting way formations was utilized in a novel I’ve read in the past was that instead of having to be set before a conflict to have effect the mc could set one up in seconds as his skill peaked. Also Ik mc usually master multipleskills like pill crafting and weapons forging but I believe it would be refreshing to see our mc specialized in formations only and it would be more realistic.
Nice start there, being kidnapped by some tsundere and becoming a couple due to his handsome appearance. The system only has roles of improving his intelligence and fusing techniques cultivated to perfection, but the use of this function seems more redundant, and the quality of your writing is average. Everything else is acceptable for the moment.
I can understand going from 4 to 6 crystals but jumping to 12 and not allowing the reader to watch ad to unlock is highway Robbery. If this continues I'm boycotting and I urge fellow readers too do the same. Besides their are forums online that will give you the spoilers if your desperate.
I really don't understand all the good reviews. This is a good idea done really poorly. Story is rushed, characters are cookie-cutter cliches, and MC becomes OP way to fast. For example - he gets a sword skill, uses his cheat to upgrade it, and then without truly studying the new skill he swings a Tree Branch and slices off a piece of a mountain. I could only get to chapter 17 before I gave up on this mess.
So, he is quite a ordinary kid until he got a inheritance from the godhead. Why can't author make an protagonist extraordinary talent but doesn't really cultivate.
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Is a pretty good book if u can deal with the unstability of posting, but a good book nonetheless.I really love how she takes a turn past chapter 40, because that made it a whole lot new story.
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five out of five simply for having the shortest first chapter and somehow still managing to make a serious story lol.Okay but for real. I'd actually give this like a 3 or maybe a low 4. It is a kind of funny story. It uses dark horse styles of comedy with people mostly making short quick replies so if you don't like that you probroaly wont find this story funny. As for action. it has its moments. I feel like they could be a lot better but it gets the point across. The story is kind of cool. You got monsters and superpowers. It is really slow though. I was expecting this to be like a few chapters of world building but we're still only at chapter 20 and are still be givin questions. Some stuff still hasn't been explained and others are slowly being unraveled.The powers are kind of cool. They take normal concepts and alter them kind of. Like you got your base fire power and this mad man said screw it and turned it into a fox. I like Chinese lore and mythology. All in all this is an okayish story. I have fun reading it but then again I've never given any rank lower than a 3 so don't trust me.
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The story is really good. The way the plot is given is just outstanding. I could literally feel the Emotions and horror. This was like watching a horror movie. Good work author.