To be honest. The story is pretty good and well written. But the side storys, in which side characters are introduced are way to long. Tbh it feels like there are less chapters about the mc then there are about side characters. And even if the focus shifts back to the mc its not rly relevant or a major part of the story. Last time he just ate/consumed some rocks and talked with a weird lazy silver guy.And the impact these side characters at the end have arent nearly worth the chapters it took to introduce them and flesh out there personality. (at least the last time)The last "antagonist" (the dude with the weird item) just randomly got eaten by the mc after his plotarmor broke.It just feels stretched and unaccessary.Anyway i hope this isnt the case with this New bad guy and i hope that there will be more focus on the actual mc of the story.Currently at chapter 49Hope you have a great day.Bye
Not gonna lie this book is so bad, not one character is likeable besides one. the start of the book is 9 chapter flashback that wasn’t even remotely entertaining, and the main character doesn’t even know how to accept reality. I only got to chapter 19 before I stopped, and I had to skim through it all before I got there. Only redeeming quality of this book that I see is the amount of updates.
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Hello, I'm a fan of the writer. <3 <3 I'm excited how the story develops, especially, the characters. The funny parts I like as well. I hope nothing tragic happens to the main characters.
Pros:+ Characters are unique and interesting and the dialogue is witty as hell+ Pacing is pretty well done, author doesn’t drag things on too much+ Story is very original and the author does his best to steer away from clichesCons:- Grammar and spelling are a bit off sometimes but not so bad to be unreadable, easily fixable with an editor- Slow release schedule, I NEED MORE- Chapters feel a bit short but maybe I’m a quick a reader? - Not many POVs explored to expand on world buildingConclusion:It’s a very nice read, can be mildly frustrating with some of the author’s grammar mistakes, especially if you’re a native english reader like me, but the author does correct his mistakes if you comment so it’s a good sign that he listens to feedback. As someone who has read A LOT of web novels, this ranks very high in my list of enjoyable reads since it is original and takes a unique take on the typical cultivation story. I hope this helps and have a wonderful day fellow reader! :)Sincerely,RobespierreK
Enjoyable, thanks for the work ?Slower paced while still keeping my ADHD brain invested and interested in reading.Exciting in a chill way that keeps you looking forward to the next chapter.I just hope you'll continue the series and keep the regular updates in the future.
This book is lovely! Fluffy and all...Honestly, the way that they author express the characters it's incredible. Each one of them had their own uniqueness and their personalities are portrayed very well by his writing.The story itself has a good pace, and it's enough to maintain the immersion without break the concentration.Overall, I loved it, I recommend it and it should have more recognition.
Good start. If he continues like this, I think it will hold. I hope the author doesn't drop it. Anyway, let's go.??????????????
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This is a great novel with great pacing and character development i read it daily and really enjoy it ??????????????? silly 140 character requirement when all can be said concisely
Second video game novel within today! (am trying to explore that genre). Storyline is good and engaging, but I think what particularly stands out here are the translator's attention to detail. One of the things that I absolutely love is those little "translator note" thingies whereby the translator explains what something means. It really helps readers to understand the context better! Give this novel a chance!
It is a good book with many different characters and reasons to read this book. I recommend using ur power and energy stones to vote for this book.