Yes! Thanks for the new chap!
[Note: I feel that the "a thread of gold hair streak across his face" may instead be "a thread of gold shine flashed across his face" but I don't have enough details]
As the Patriarch, I command all of you to vote for this novel! I would want this novel out by next week!***** *** *** ***** ***** ********* **** *** *** ******* *** ** **** *** *** **** **** *** *** **** ** ******** **** **** ***** ********** *** **** *** **** ***The above message can only be read by those with above Lv 10 cultivation..Some of you might say that im not the real Patriarch being only lv4 but i'm not lv4 im only hiding my true cultivation!
Reen on the other hand had eyes filled with the same emotions no matter how she tried to hide it which made Uoron have a harder time to suppress his explosive emotions.
'Why is this happening to me?!'
As Heng Huan saw Ting Mei's glistening eyes eying his crepe, he couldn't help but sigh, " Was this crepe more good looking than him or what? "
Very interesting story. Hopefully Satan & Emily clarify everything soonest.
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I can't help but to find humor in this.It's a great cultivation that's actually entertaining. Each chapter feels like an onslaught of madness. keep it up.
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Within the first page there were multiple grammar mistakes ,so that is where I stopped reading!! Hey your **** together or quit trying to publish online books.
The story is nice. Writer did a good job in plot and imagenation.Story development is very good. Atleast story don't move at snails pace. that is good for readers like me.Character are designed well. but yes there is still need of some improvement but writer can do that slowly. Chapter updates quite regularly.Writer did a very good job in world background designing. His imagination is quite good. Story has some flows in terms of grammar . but that can be ignored as it didn't affect me much if the overall all story is good.overall plot is good to give it a try and worthy of attention. minor mistakes can be overlooked as this is writes first book.keep up good work author ?