Ive found a chinese novel where mc is born as a turtle…1 in a world where spirit energy is coming back..Another in a cultivation world.. where the mc is a turtle but has splits (clones of different animals) i think it had like 1k some thing chapters.
All right I just read the first 40 chapters and all I can say is wow that’s novel is very bad the writing is sixth grade at best, the overall flow makes no sense, as well it’s full of the troubles we’ve come to hate. Please don’t let this not go through I’m gonna do the next 20 but probably won’t reveal.
Cant wait for more and this amazing world just keeps getting better every time a new chapter drops he can't wait to see what's coming next... the story has drama humor action adventure learning and growth it's pretty well edited and overall it's easy to enjoy the characters what more can you ask for in a book
The MC's name is awesome in a short period of time I was able to understand his goals and origin. Really good book, love to read it at night please read
Very good read for someone just starting out. The chapters are well thought out and the wording is great for a novice. Keep up the good work and keep this book going! Look forward to more from you!
It had a good start with a good background story and development but in the middle of the story the author decided to add more bullish to the story.
For example the author will talk about a side character which just appeared for 2 whole characters (his family- experience - sect -third aunt husband who's is a city lord - bla bla bla) and in the third chapter he will anger the mc and they start fighting and the author will use this chance to waste one or two more chapters by just describing the side character movement or sword and when the author thinks he wasted enough time the side character will die be one hit.
So 4 chapters with no point or plot and this happens a lot of the time and it's no wonder the novel has 4k chapters
This story starts out very similar to another novel on here, Alchemy Emperor of the Divine Dao, where the MC is originally a supreme being that died and is reborn/transmigrate into the same world years after his death. After awaking, the MC is OP with both cultivation and alchemy knowledge. Everyone around the MC, including the sect he is in, seems to have the IQ of a dummy and hell-bent on trying to kill him for the dumbest reasons. As for love interest, the MC is always reminiscing about his former lover that may or may not still be alive. There is a maid with a special constitution and two beauties that are acquainted with the MC.
A post apocalypse world setting with interesting plot. Though the language quality is a bit bad grammatically, the plot is well thought. As only 30 or so chapters are released so far I can't say much, but the story so far looks promising with no plot holes and fillers. Hope release rate will be more frequent.
I really think this story has so much potential. I like it so far. I think if the author could improve a few things, it would be more appealing to readers. First of all, the tenses need to be unified, either past or present. Some editing needs to be done as there are many grammatical mistakes. I think there should be more character development, maybe backgrounds, goals, motivation. Something that kinda bothered me was the fact that the author uses both first and last name every time he talks about a characters. I think one is enough, also descriptions are lacking. Great work though, I am sure you will improve with time!! Gambatte kudasai!!
Hey i really like this story i hope that the author will continue to write the book I love books like this farming is one of my favorite type of books I also like the gaming tags it makes a a book more interesting when you add leveling systems I hope I can find more books like this
Very good hostoriabme love the development that is having and more than anything I hope that it is not abandoned I see how incredible the story will be if it is not left abandoned for me is very well raised, I want the development until it stayed
Unique and different. A person being reincarnated as a system. Just a few chapters but I am already hooked. On top of that, the writing was superb. Each chapter was written well. Everything was perfect.
Author, keep up the good work!