Its cool, but please stop repeating chapters webnovel.
Reminds me of a certain building world theme. Don't know how long it can last but it does look interesting enough for you to enjoy for light reading
Starting of the story is quite good. I thought he would make full use of system. But he rarely uses system, under the pretense that the system may not be permanent. Some battles are very long description ( literally boring) and some battles were not even of MC side, they were battles of other kingdom ( nearly 10 chs of single battle of that kingdom).
I thought it might be interesting, since I like these kind of RL system novels, but honestly this has been pretty disappointing. It's just so repetitive - basically every scene is 'MC goes to some rich place/just a place in general, gets looked down on, faceslaps', rinse and repeat. There's no real story or plot here, it's pretty clear the author's just phoning it in.
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Very interesting fantasy themed story. I'm very curious what kind of power Ryo who just awakened, can he become the strongest Rifter?!
And another one bites the dust. so much for stealing my atones for months to leave me empty handed with nothing to look forward to each day like you used to.
When I first reviewed this novel in the first chapter, I had no idea what to say. But now that this book has won gold in WPC 220, hopefully, I can answer some questions.
The first thing I want to ensure is the quality of the work. I have two years of writing experience, so don't worry about bad grammar or robotic character interactions.
MC is neither evil nor kind. He is stuck in a VR game with thousands of players, but his priority is to get out of the game.
MC is a novice in VR games (this is literally his first time playing one), but that doesn't mean he will be a total noob. He has professionally trained in swordfights, martial arts, and many more things. The main goal is to survive,
Romance and Harem. At first, I wasn't sure whether I should add romance or not, but a novel without romance is like coffee/tea without sugar; some like it, while some don't. So the romance will be a sub-plot here.
As for the harem, I will add it as a subplot too. His goal is to survive and beat the game, not to collect girls.
There is also cultivation, but it is also a subplot. And Zach's (MC) cultivation is unique that allows him to cultivate infinite MP.
I have also added illustrations of places and characters in the paragraph comments (if you see a blue one, click on it) for reference.
I can't think of any more questions. Feel free to ask here, I will reply to them all!
I love your book Armipotent so I will give this book a 5 star. I hope it will have a steady update and I hope the best for you Author_san!
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this book is nonstop amazement it just sucked me in and I didn't want to let it go it just hit the right spot just endless Fascination I'm wanting to know just what would happen next I wasn't sure and I am definitely happy and excited to see where this will go in the future
This Novel Already Have a Manga Version With Same Story and Same Name... and With Many Chapters Go And Read It..............................
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