A decent book, but with somewhat iffy uploading schedule. Its hard to find good novels on this site and this is one of them, with decent enough of a plot, realistic ish development, and somewhat far reaching actions this book if it had more support and chapters, is a wonderfull addition to my digital library.
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 31/03/2021 @chap373 (released chap till date: 444)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: A must read story for harem fans. A good romance story but not for those who are coming after VRMMORPG tag. long review: pros: 1) Author did a nice job in romance here. A 'true hidden gem' for harem fans. 2) This is a little dark novel. But also has fluffy side. Contradictory huh? Read it and you might understand. 3) One word for world building: FANTASTIC! With put real hard work in creating the plot and the mystery. This world still after so many chaps is a mystery. 4) I love the writing format of the novel. Especially those moments of system (not a spoiler since it's in tags) but yeah! I loved it..5) Characters created by the author are awesome! They all feel real, they have their own personalities and ambitions, something many authors of these days lack.6) This novel surprisingly contains humor. Yeah ik there is a comedy tag, but despite the tag most of the novel do stupid jokes.. like fart jokes and the likes. This one I truly enjoyed the comedy moments.7) the interactions between the characters are awesome!! This is how conversations in reality takes place, something which cannot be easily portrayed! The interactions between the mc and his girls never failed to put a smile on my face at the end of the chapter8) I love how the author released few chaps with his girls POV (tho mainly focused on FL, but still a plus)cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] As mentioned above this novel has a dark side despite the fluffy romance moments. (This depends person to person, for me a pro)2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] No probs with updates. My basic requirement with updates is (7ch/d for og) & (14ch/d for tl). But this is my personal scale so you might as well ignore it.3) There are few typo errors. No prob with grammar.. (well there are prob with pronoun at the last chaps i read like mistaking mc for she) but mainly spelling mistakes and misplacement of words. 4) The writing.. I already mentioned many times in my comments but it is confusing few times who is speaking what.5) Even though the interactions are awesome, we many times fail to grasp the emotions and facial expressions of the characters, since it's never mentioned what expressions the characters really have on their face. 6) pacing i felt sometimes it was little slow. It would have been better if it was a little faster. IMO:- maybe if the confusion of who is speaking which line is reduced it might become a better read- RATINGS: writing: 8/10 (pro-4&6 & con-3&4)update: 8.5/10 (con-2)plot: 8.5/10 (pro-1,2&3, con-1) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-5,6&8)pacing: 8/10 (con-6)dialogues: 9/10 (pro-7 con-5)entertainment: 8.5/10OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion:As a harem fan, I would definitely want this novel to get more attention!! Also to the readers please support this novel with at least powerstones if possible!!And thanks to the author for the chaps as always! WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC may seem a little edgy.- rather than a anti hero, one might as well refer him as evil- sometimes mc is sharp and sometimes dumb (there is a reason tho)- mc is dense af!
To be honest, it's a nice novel. The plot is interesting. Writing quality is good, and the same goes for World building, and characters. I recommend you give it a try, it's worth your time. Anyways, I'm off. Adios.
not even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wewnot even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wewnot even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wewnot even 20 chapters and there's already a young master cliche wew
mtl please ...........................................................................................................................................
The best thing from this novel is the hilarious narration. Author does it so well that the writing and pace managed to pull me in the world. Everything seems vivid then. Everything is happening. And my stomach is still sore from all that laughing .The second best thing, woman.
So, let's be real here. This is one of the most generic, paint-by-numbers stories I've seen, even on this site. MC is a handsome, cool, casually pretentious, arrogant, unreasonable, OP dude? Check. He has a fatty friend? Check. Is in conflict with a rich silk pants type who has a grudge against him for a dumb reason? Check. Is supported by a beautiful and capable woman who also has a high status? Check. Not only is it generic, it's poorly executed as well. The setting is somewhat interesting, I guess, with the reincarnation tower and all, but that's about all that can be said for it.Massive derec. Can't believe something like this was picked.
choose this story guys, I have followed this story through raws and it only gets betterthe Nationalism in this story is fair enough, plus kinda legitimate And final point, it's easily the best in this trial read ?hopefully, original authors get some inspiration from this story
If you are going charge spirit stone, charge it for extra chapters you write and not for fucking previously translated work.I have no problem to use spirit stone for extra translated chapter but you r just screwing around charging for earlier done work.
Its racist novel like super eel. Its ****S⁴The thing is it does not MATTTTEEERRR if they are not spying on us now. Because eventually they will. They are a state owned company. That state is a communist regime that this hellbent on slaughtering theirr own people from practicing some Chinese yoga. Fung gong. And that's not even mention the weger Muslim population. They are anything but a good government. And they have ambitiouns to conquer the world. Aka belt and road initiative. Military ports on foreign nations. Now why would you want that government to handle something so volatile? I don't care what you think about the us. They have done more good than bad from defeating the nazi to japan . And give me one time china did that was on the same level?As for your video you are stupid. Can't even comprehend something so simple.Trump said that if China were to propose a new trade deal Huawei would surely be included in it. As china puts great importance to its tools like Huawei.The thing is it does not MATTTTEEERRR if they are not spying on us now. Because eventually they will. They are a state owned company. That state is a communist regime that this hellbent on slaughtering theirr own people from practicing some Chinese yoga. Fung gong. And that's not even mention the weger Muslim population. They are anything but a good government. And they have ambitiouns to conquer the world. Aka belt and road initiative. Military ports on foreign nations. Now why would you want that government to handle something so volatile? I don't care what you think about the us. They have done more good than bad from defeating the nazi to japan . And give me one time china did that was on the same level?As for your video you are stupid. Can't even comprehend something so simple.Trump said that if China were to propose a new trade deal Huawei would surely be included in it. As china puts great importance to its tools like Huawei.
What a great novel ruined by a terrible translator. Extremely sporadic releases even during premium.Will definitely be a fun read for people until you catch up
It took 60 chapters to realise, but this is basically pokemon ?.The mc is a bit of a simp and treats his childhood friend a bit like a slave, but the story is good so far. Looking forward to full release ?