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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..
Rated low simply for grammar and first person writing. I did this and I did that do not make for an interesting story to read. I struggled to read even the first page
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Sounds interesting and hoping it will develop enthusiastically......looking forward to reading it, though it sounds captivating hope it will remain so....
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If only you continue this book it will be one of the best books
Just read the first chapter, good one. If the story is really not about cultivation i'm selling my soul today. Go Aiden, commit third degree murder!
(Writing this about five chapters in)The prologue starts off mysterious and overall intriguing, making me want to continue onto the next chapter right away. In terms of the writing quality, it is highly-detailed and immersive; lending an smooth visualization of the world the characters are in. The characters themselves are interesting, human in the fact that they are flawed.
I really love this webnovel, but I'll tone it down for this review.A lot of the characters are not rounded. So far, most of them can be described as geeky Voidwalkers, perverted Voidwalkers, beautiful and strong girls/women, rich people, and other background students. However, even if these characters are often portayed this way, I enjoy the writer's way of conveying the characters' other thoughts and emotions (e.g., modesty, regret, excitement, anger, thoughfulness, etc.). A favorite amusement of mine is the dialogue/bickering between the MC and his fellow Voidwalkers, but I'm also struck in the heart when the Voidwalkers fleetingly think about their sorrows that we don't know too much about or other deep comments that touch upon their desolate selves.The main guy is OP/masterful but is partnered with a an average sorcereress. There are so many sweet moments where this duo act as each other's foil, highlighting the goodness in their characters and making you want to support them!For now, most of the setting is within an academy for future master sorcerers and fighters so I think there's potential for adventures later on. The word-building is ****** and kept together with a few rules involving the Void and principles on magic. I think the pacing is perfect, but several people thought a certain battle went on for too many chapters.All in all, I think the characters are adorably memorable and it's a fun story to keep up with. Read it if you:1. Can enjoy the humor2. Don't mind/like anime and game references3. OP MC who is kinda limited in using his full potential but is still OP.4. Can tolerate/enjoy a loli (15 y/o) as the main girl who is weaker than the OP MC.
This novel is just the same as Emperor of the World system written by the same author. same plotline and even their system is the same and also their adventures??
Heck yeah this novel is a little rough but in a good way I see that it has a lot of potential and I can see this going a lot of different ways but I hope the author does not go the (evil sect name but good actually path)