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Got this recommendation from my friends. And I am impressed after reading this. The story narration is very good. No useless dragging the plot and every chapter is intense and really good. Adding it to library. Story got potential.
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This is a typical trash system novel. Basically everything is just plain absurd. He gets $50M for driving one person to their destination, and basically every reward is just too stupid. For anyone writing this type of story I personally think that the stupidest reward a 'system' can give is ownership of a company.
A complete waste of power. If the system automatically detects the crime to launch the mission they should lead straight to the banking system or income tax. BEEP. Tax evasion.BIP. Money laundry. Now that would be a horrible power to have in a major European museum or public archive of cold cases.
Way better then I expected from trial read and it's novel title/synopsis. The character doesn't get an instant oh I have 100% block or 100% damage reflection passive instantly.
The plot was a bit common with the same orphan thing in the starting but still, you did your best to make it different from others. The book is still in its starting stage so I can't say much about it but I bet its a promising novel.
so keep it up and sorry for the late review.
This is basically just brain/eye candy for people who love op protagonists. This book is under appreciated. It is a fairly fast pased novel that always keeps you wanting more.
Way too many plotholes, the translation is garbage and some of the “China is the best and korea bad” at chapter 7 its a pretty bad novel dont recommend.
It's pretty good. The cheat is like the mix between "Am I a God?" and some basic tamer novel. Totally want it to get picked..................
In one chapter he launched an attack and turned all five opponents into a bloody mist. Then the next chapter the commander is miraculously alive after being turned into a bloody mist and leads his sect to attack. I think that should set you expectations for this novel.
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