I think that the story had a good starting, but the story development in the start and now is not stable. The background of the world is also not well described. And many of the concepts are added into the story, which makes it very much complicated to enjoy. The story has the potential to become much better.
The story is so addicting even though it's very long story. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????????❤️?????????????❤️
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The best sports novel i have read so far.. I put a 5 for all.. the only thing that could be a 4 is the world bg since it is just a regular modern setting, nothing creative. But i still love this one and my current favorite. More power author, thanks big time for bringing us this novel.
What should I say? I rarely leave an comment in Qidian but my eyes bled like hell. Writing-Quality is so-so, which is acceptable for new authors, but the MC is dumb af and propably a laughing stock in his past live. Even in the beginning chapters he tried to help people, who actually want to kill him - the dumb**** even knew it. He knew people have malice against him but he still behaves like a wannabe brain. Some events doesnt even make sense, like there is a rational and smart way to solve problematic events but the MC instead goes backwards in order to solve it. There's also alot of unnecessary text blocks which are redundant and only makes the story hard to read. Dont get me wrong, the story has a lot of potential but there are just to many holes without any sense (like how the mc died in the first chapter on open streets but no one reacted and cared, as if the whole area had no people and vehicles). I guess it was my bad to have high hopes for new authors or im used to good written famous novels.
Quite interesting. I love their chemistry. Can't wait for the next update.
I feel for lyra
there are a 2nd. there is another wrong wordl.l
no read yet
I don't know what negative comments you got but I think you're really amazing writer and it's a really good story and I cannot wait till the next chapter..... sooner than later please!
lovely such a nice fiction full of suspense wanting to read to see me know what will happen next twist and turns are so beautiful keep it up
Great author