Thats a suprisingly good story.Very nice to find something this good in the originals. I will be reading that and i hope it will stay on this level;]
I am always amazed by the way you write, waiting for more
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It’s a really good book so far. I love the story line, and the characters, this is a good book. I’ve even recommended to some of my friends. I encourage the people who are reading this to share or recommend to your friends! I did have some confusion at a point or two but after all it’s a good book!?❤️?❤️
The premise of the novel is good. Writing could be improved. Biggest drawback is that the MC is too OP making it a bit unappealing to read.
Solid character solid world love the conversation and interactions. The mc is like able and funny and stays to his own business I love it. Only complaint is there not enough chapters!! Please release more!!
this is good and refreshing theme, people tell their problem in the bar that make good food and wine, just one thing doesnt match thought the system, if there is no system this is great
I like it. It's pretty similar to The Novel's Extra and The Author's POV. Anyone who's read either can pretty much predict where the story is going to go, which isn't necessarily bad. I can't really say much when it comes to the world and characters because the novel is newer and there aren't a lot of chapters. Character development is really what makes these kinds of stories stand out from the rest; when storylines are similar, it's the characters that determine if the novel is good or bad. Both the world and the characters have room to grow.What really hurts this is the grammar. It's legible, and that's about it. Most of the people on Webnovel probably aren't real strict about grammar, but it's also clear where good grammar is what determines which novels people keep reading and which ones are dropped. A few things I'd like to point out: Run each chapter through Grammarly. The free version works very well. It's a great way to improve grammar.Periods go inside of quotes. I noticed this a lot in Ch. 17. It should be: "Blah blah blah." instead of "blah blah blah". The same rule is true for commas. A lot of the sentences are broken; it feels like words are missing.Finally, use commas. I see a lack of commas in a lot of novels. It's more of an experience thing, deciding where to place them, but reading well-written works helps with figuring out where to place them. I was taught to read each sentence out loud, and to put a comma where I naturally paused. Overall though, it's a good story with potential, worth a try if you like this kind of novel.
A slow, but actual decent plot. There are some stereotypes but even the villains aren't overbearing. Our MC is a hard worker has a creepy encounter, which leads to him becoming a spiritualist. It is an enjoyable read if you want to read a grounded martial Arts novel.
I am great fan of btth and even bigger fan of it's 18+ fanfics.....I kindly request the author please don't drop it unfinished.?
Umm.. MC's a Mega Simp.. Battles are bad.. Time is Inconsistent..All I've Learnt is that.. CEO's = Winner.. 1 Person cannot Beat 1000+ in this Power System..MC.. no matter what he can do.. CEO's have 500+ People to give him Power..MC sees a great Path but, hesitates to choose a weak Path..Can Divinate his Future!! but, Only checks 1 Cave at a time!?Can Literally Become OP with Divination.. The Power to see Multiple Futures.. Test people's Loyalty, Directions to Power/Resources, Enemies Locations, Plan for Perfect Outcomes..Can Learn How to do Anything --> His Futures can learn the Mistakes so his Present will Only have the Best Results.. (Future Versions Cultivates 1,000,000,000 Faulty Methods for Present Version to Get TOP 1000 Perfect Methods for Free)
Was Good. Better than TSK by Zhandii.My comment was too short so need more characterslsjbfdkusbdfkhbsdkhfbkshbfdkhsbdkfhbicbvkjxbicbvkjxbvibwldbfisdbkfjbskdfbhsdfbhsdbf