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Great potential ruined by the number of flawsConsistently referring to herself as an Eastern soul get over it alreadyUsing Eastern terminology for example calling strangers brother or sisterAuthor not replying to messages or commentsTheir are Other flaws as well
Very immersive plot and the Overpowered Main Character is really awesome. So many mystery and good story progression. And I am waiting for the real truth during the war.
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Reminds me of the Bloodborne lore, too few chapters to truly review. Looking forward to it.
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This is detailed review written after reading all the published chapters (95 chapters).
Writing quality: 4⭐ The author has stated that he is not a native English speaker so some mistakes are expected. There aren't that many spelling mistakes but grammatical errors are there. So four stars are enough.
Story development: 4.5⭐ A very fast paced story with little info dumps. The author however slows down the story for a few chapters to explain a few things and all that. Overall the story isn't full of chapters in which MC is breaking through or creating pills using different ingredients. After all, we are all culture lovers.
Character design: 3.5-4 ⭐ The characters are certainly good and the harem girls are strong and not like those weak girls in Chinese novels. It is mentioned that even the MC is afraid of them at certain times. I would have given more stats but we don't recieve that many character interactions and details until the second volume.
Updating stability: 4.5⭐ The author updates seven chapters a week and I haven't seen him missing any updates. However, I would personally like ten to twelve chapters a week but if it will decrease the quality, please don't do it.
World Background: 3.5-4.5⭐ Again I can't decide how many stars should I give. At first glance, the world is like any other Chinese cultivation world but later on we find out that it's a little darker than those world's, especially the Central continent. I am still accumulating information about the world and I might update this later on.
Overall 4-4.5⭐If you love dual cultivation and harem with a MC who doesn't care about any young masters or royals, this novel is perfect for you. As I said earlier, this is a fast paced novel so you won't be bored sitting around waiting for the MC to breakthrough or creating a pill. I hope that this review helped you understand the novel.
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made by the same author as world's best martial artist so I have high expectations
nice
Great book! Love the beginning and the book itself. this is my first time reading an eastern fantasy book and it's amazing!
keep it going author! You are doing a great job!
Chapters are not in order, genders are not consistent, portion of chapters are pasted into others. Only those of the MTL DAO could enjoy this. It is to bad, because I liked the idea behind this story. But, I read for entertainment, not to solve literary complications.
Maybe it gets better past C24. I won't know because there are plenty of other novels that put in the effort to satisfy their readers.
an interesting Fl book without an annoying ml love candidate that wants to steal the show. at least until chap 100.
the fl has a good background story and is learning fast how to fight and well the only thing that doesn't make really sense is that she can't already fight with her experience in games or it has a reason that I overlooked like that vr wasn't good enough back then or something like that...
well it is one of the best Fl stories that I read until now that isn't romance and feelings focused.
I really hope it doesn't get dropped or loses its focus on gaming and the meta story to a "everything is bad when I'm not with my ML
Good story but can u power up the mc
Op mc are best. And please write a little longer. But I like the story about it.
But are u going add more powerful weapon or u are going to give him like training a weapon master